Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Invasion of Tatooine

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Invasion of Tatooine

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Haven't done a battle in a while. It's pretty short, only 1,063 words.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Besides a small copy-edit, it looks good.--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 20:39, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:18, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:55, December 23, 2011 (UTC)
  4. I wish I had this game, but besides that, well done! :D Plagueis327 6:54, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Menkooroo 04:26, January 15, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote --Eyrezer 07:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Tatooine
  • The Battle of Coruscant lists several concurrent battles in its infobox --- shouldn't they also be in this article's "next" field?
    • I don't think we can do that. Battles last for different periods of time. Recapture of Tythe could have began before the Invasion of Tatooine and lasted up to and concurrent with the Battle of Coruscant. We just don't know that.
  • If there are Venators in the battle, then how about giving Republic Navy some infobox lovin'? And maybe the army & navy equivalents of the CIS?
    • Done.
  • In the body: "the clone troopers, who had received reinforcements called in by X1" kind of comes off as a "by the way, this happened earlier" comment. Can you make it more chronological?
    • Addressed.
  • Is there a quote from the DS version that could lead "Behind the scenes?" All from me! Great stuff. Menkooroo 22:44, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 07:05, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

  • Just curious, why does the article go with the PSP version? Corellian PremierRobotechAll along the watchtower 03:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • Because either way, it has to go with one or the other, and I just liked the PSP version more gameplay-wise. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC)