Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Invasion of Spinnaker

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Invasion of Spinnaker

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:55, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Shh
• Date Archived: 00:50, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 2029 words (188 introduction, 1111 body, 730 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1995 words (187 introduction, 1079 body, 729 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Video Games

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. Nice work - just don't forget that "however" and "but" grammatically cannot be used the same way. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:20, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
2. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 00:00, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
3. Had done some copy-editing awhile back but I guess forgot to vote.—spookywilloww^talk 18:46, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 02:33, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
5. Nice work on the game as always! Just take care with image caption punctuation. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:31, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
6. Fan26 (Talk) 17:14, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
7. Great stuff! —Tomotron^{Sith Council} 00:48, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

SE

• In the second paragraph of Digging in, can you clarify who the attackers are? Bit of a jump from building up defences to them annihilating these attackers. "The droids strategized to fortify their position before annihilating their attackers"
• Did they fight to take the river? Where was the river in relation to the village? Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 08:41, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:25, 3 May 2023 (UTC)

Fan

• I think Sidious should be contextualised as a Sith Lord. Fan26 (Talk) 17:00, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 22:48, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
• Are the "worker droids" mentioned in the third paragraph of "Digging in" the same as the PKN-49 worker droids mentioned earlier, or a different droid model? Fan26 (Talk) 17:13, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
  • It's not guaranteed, the player will inevitably build their own OX9s to help, which I've made clear in an earlier paragraph. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:31, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 00:50, 6 June 2023 (UTC)