Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Horox Ryyder

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Horox Ryyder

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:07, 29 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not a GA I thought would be boosted to FAN this soon, but glad he has been
  • Date Archived: 16:52, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1334 words (202 introduction, 778 body, 354 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1334 words (202 introduction, 778 body, 354 behind the scenes)
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(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

  1. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 16:25, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
    Inqvote Bless De Agostini. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:55, 1 December 2022 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- OOM 224 (he/him) 21:23, 1 February 2023 (UTC))
  2. Inqvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:21, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Objections handled via Discord.—spookywillowwtalk 15:38, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Anx = underrated OOM 224 (he/him) 10:15, 4 February 2023 (UTC)
  5. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 22:24, 5 March 2023 (UTC)
  6. Dropbearemma LesbianRebellion (she/her) 22:21, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
  7. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:48, 19 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • The first paragraph under "A hard ten years" has a double ref, is another ref missing in between?
    • Looks like a relic from a previous version of wording. Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:33, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Apparently the Anx is named Graxol Kelvyyn in canon as well, but I do not have the source to double-check.
    • Ah totally forgot about that! Sorted. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:33, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
  • (Review note) Make sure to be ok with my copy-edit. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:21, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Looks good to me, thanks! Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:33, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
Emma
  • Is it worth briefly specifying Valorum's scandal mentioned just before "A hard ten years"? Dropbearemma LesbianRebellion (she/her) 22:58, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Re-reading Horox's entry in the French Encyclopedia, it's actually not clear exactly which scandal they're talking about. Various things go wrong during Valorum's time in office, but in Valorum's entry the book doesn't describe any of them as scandals specifically and I not confident enough which it's meant to be to make an assumption. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:14, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • This is gorgeously written, Ayre! Such a joy to read. Dropbearemma LesbianRebellion (she/her) 22:58, 7 March 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:50, 19 March 2023 (UTC)