- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Harkov
- Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:30, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Now you shall pay for your treachery.
(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
Imperialles 11:02, 29 July 2008 (UTC)- Goodwood
(Alliance Intelligence) 20:35, 30 July 2008 (UTC) - Greyman(Talk) 16:44, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
TIE Fighter = awesome. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:17, 8 August 2008 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:55, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 15:44, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
Given the detail within the article itself, could it be possible to expand the intro?--Goodwood (Alliance Intelligence) 00:16, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
- Expanded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:08, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa:
The way this sentence is reading seems like it's missing a word or two. Please reword: "The Geddawai was boarded by a stormtrooper transport and, once captured delivered Harkov to the"- Reworded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
There are few things throughout the Sepan Civil War section that certainly seem like they should be linked to something, if not redlinked. I notice:The attack: "arrived in the Sepan system in time to stop a Dimok attack on a Ripoblus convoy."- Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Reprisal raid: "the Protector moved to stop a Ripoblus reprisal raid"- Linked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Another battle article? "...and subsequent recovery of further weapons"- Part of the same battle as the last one. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Battle article: "Harkov next led the Protector into action to rescue Ripoblus scientists"- Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Attack: " Imperial Intelligence learned of a rendezvous between the Ripoblus and Dimok leaders near Sepan 8 as the two factions looked to unite against the Empire, and the Imperials mounted an attack to capture them."- Stubified. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Attack: "With an attack from Ripoblus and Dimok forces expected"Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:24, 10 August 2008 (UTC)- Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
- Good man. Thank you for the effort. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:55, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
- Redlinked. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:42, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:44, 13 August 2008 (UTC)