Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/HG-211

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HG-211

  • Nominated by: Jinzler 12:29, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My slightly late barn-burner contribution

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Plagueis327 19:40, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote This article is not Uffel. Menkooroo 22:37, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ~SavageBOB sig 11:47, June 26, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Looks good JangFett (Talk) 19:11, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:07, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:34, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:44, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Mercury 211
  • Could "Characteristics" make a note of his dedication to the Uffel droid community/worry about a public relations crisis for it?
    • Done --Jinzler 14:02, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
  • Should his diplomacy mode be noted and detailed in "Characteristics" ? All from me. Menkooroo 07:38, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
    • Added, thanks for your review --Jinzler 14:02, June 24, 2012 (UTC)
Savaged
  • Is the MSF mouse droid called an MSE variant in the source material? I ask because I originally did [this] but then reverted myself after looking at the MSF mouse droid page. If it is indeed a variant, the redirect of mouse droid to MSE-series is fine. If not, we need to indicate that "mouse droid" is a term that applies to more than just MSEs.
    • Yes, I can confirm that the source material does indeed indicate that the MSF was an MSE variant. However, I am not opposed to creating a separate "mouse droid" article, because the term seems to be a generic name for a particular class of droids, rather than just shorthand for an MSE-series droid. I will keep my eyes open for any sources that confirm this theory. --Jinzler (talk) 11:31, June 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • Can you specify why ion guns proved a problem for the droids while fighting?
    • I've added some more context. --Jinzler (talk) 11:31, June 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • Perhaps break "Characteristics" into two paragraphs? I think it might work to have one about his physical appearance and one about his personality. That's it! ~SavageBOB sig 11:15, June 25, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • Do we know who or what sent LN-73 to Uffel in the first place? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 18:56, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
    • Yes, we do, and it is now mentioned in the article. --Jinzler (talk) 13:27, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • It appears there are some additional features listed in the Characteristics that should be denoted in the infobox. Specifically, his sensor package, motion detector, and IR vision. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:42, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done; I apologise for taking so long to address your objection. --Jinzler (talk) 20:30, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:44, August 16, 2012 (UTC)