Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Great Heep

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  • 1 Great Heep
    • 1.1 (3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Savaged…
        • 1.1.2.2 Floyd has one thing
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Great Heep

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:11, May 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Curse you, Baobab! One for the Barn-Burner.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Plagueis327 02:34, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Giant Gobots FTW! ~SavageBOB sig 16:58, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:07, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Spectacular. Menkooroo 02:33, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:28, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Seeing those DB refs. Curse you, SW.com JangFett (Talk) 18:47, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
  7. Heh, sludgegulper droids.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:57, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Savaged…
  • Can you explain what you mean by "druid-run" on first mention?
    • Ahem, that should be droid-run. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:34, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • I think the quote under "Final defeat" needs reformatting, since it's only two speakers and should thus just use the basic "Quote" template.
    • Copied from Screed's article. Now changed in both. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:34, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Is it proper to say the Heep died or was killed (in several places)? As a droid, would it be more appropriate to say he was deactivated or destroyed?
    • Changed. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:34, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Can you add a few words to explain what "fourth-degree" means for droids?
    • Added. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:51, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • Perhaps mention that his hands were red? ~SavageBOB sig 21:57, May 25, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:51, May 26, 2012 (UTC)
Floyd has one thing
  • What's the "dominant organic species" mentioned in the "Agent of the Abominor" section? I assume its the Yuuzhan Vong, but it needs to be stated. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:29, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure we can state it. Dan Wallace said in the endnotes for the NEGD that it was strongly implied that they were the Yuuzhan Vong, but as far as I'm aware it's never actually been confirmed. I could put it in a footnote if that would work. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:35, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
      • Eh, I guess its alright then. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:07, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:45, July 15, 2012 (UTC)