Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Form V: Shien / Djem So

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Form V: Shien / Djem So

Support

  1. Jwebb13HoloNetSith Emblem 02:54, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
  2. Darth Vatrir 16:26, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
  3. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 03:55, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
  4. Gallery is silly, but it's a good article anyway. - Lord Hydronium 00:19, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
  5. I like. If it's really missing Hero's Guide info., that's my only objection. —Unsigned comment by Xwing328 (talk • contribs)
  6. Jaina Solo(Goddess Stuff) 23:44, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
  7. ATATatarismall.png 15:53, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

Objections

  • Needs sourced, (Rule 11) fix all the present tense, (Rule 4). Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 03:05, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
    • I think I've taken care of all usages of the present tense, but let me know if I missed any. Jwebb13HoloNetSith Emblem 23:00, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
      • I still see several mentions of "is" and "are." Most of those happen when something is written OOU- which is also a violation of Rule 4. Example: "It is known that Anakin Skywalker mastered. . . " It would be better to re-write this as "Anakin Skywalker mastered . . . ", IMO. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 00:26, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
        • Right, I'll go over it again later when I get a minute. Jwebb13HoloNetSith Emblem 22:40, 13 February 2007 (UTC)
  • No sourcing, small introduction, first two images are terrible screenshots. .... 08:17, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
  • Unencyclopedic tone (Rule 1). - breathesgelatinTalk 20:01, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
  1. Doesn't contain Hero's Guide information. —Jaymach Ral'Tir (talk) 02:54, 1 April 2007 (UTC)
    • There wasn't any new information in the Hero's Guide, but I did add it the list of sources. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 14:55, 2 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius - Wookieepedia:Inq/Form V: Shien/Djem So 20:42, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

  • I just recently overhauled this article, so if anyone sees any problems that I missed, I'd appreciate your input. Jwebb13HoloNetSith Emblem 02:55, 11 February 2007 (UTC)