Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Force storm (wormhole)

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Force storm (wormhole)

• Nominated by: Xicer9^(Combadge) 00:54, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: POWAHHH!

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Imperialles 23:10, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
2. Unlimited powah! Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:26, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
3. Per Tranner. :P JangFett ^(Talk) 21:16, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
4. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:45, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 00:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
6. Nothing jumped out at me that needed mentioning or tending to, so it looks sound. Heck of a thing to imagine while listening to the audio, though. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 04:55, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
7. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 21:07, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. I really want to read, fix, and review this article, but first you gotta make the first sentence of the intro less ridiculously redundant. Graestan^(Talk) 16:02, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
   • How does that look? Xicer9^(Combadge) 02:03, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
2. A few things:
   • Description: "violent vortices of Force energy"; "swirling blue vortices of destructive Force energy" Very similar phrasing in two successive sentences.
   • Users: "possess the ability to create"; "Darkstaff had the ability to create" Same thing here.
   • That infobox image is beautiful. Nice article, too! --Imperialles 22:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
     • All taken care of, and thanks for taking a look. Xicer9^(Combadge) 23:09, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
3. "Bereft of the Force, Rivan was easily slain by a Force-sensitive warrior." How/why was he bereft of the Force? Other than that, excellent. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 20:43, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
   • A couple sentences earlier I stated that the Darkstaff had to leech Rivan's Force energy to create the storm. Does it need further clarification? Xicer9^(Combadge) 21:07, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
     • Bah, no it doesn't, sorry. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:45, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• If the article I linked for the Battle of Almas is referring to a different battle on Almas, please remove it. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 00:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)