Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/First Duel in the Iron Citadel

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

First Duel in the Iron Citadel

• Nominated by:—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 14:05, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Naturally, in the spirit of Wookieeproject TOTJ.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(And now, young Skywalker, you will die.)} 23:02, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
2. Thefourdotelipsis 08:56, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
3. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 23:07, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
4. Cull Tremayne 16:00, 26 December 2008 (UTC)
5. I can't wait to see that picture on the main page. :-P Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 20:16, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
6. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:18, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. From the desk of Atarumaster88
   • "instead grew suspicious of the Jedi's seemingly benevolent swagger" the last few words could use some tweaking, IMO
     • Should be good now.
   • "on a path from which there was no return" Some would beg to differ.
     • Should be good now.
   • Small objections overall. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 17:36, 2 January 2009 (UTC)
     • Appreciate the review, brother.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 02:03, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
2. "He sent the droid off, and then surrendered himself to the intimacies of Aleema's seductive thrall." We're doing romance fiction now? :P Please reword. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:08, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
   • Lol, addressed. Appreciate the review, GT. Let me know if more is required, please.—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 19:12, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Comment

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:18, 5 January 2009 (UTC)