Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ferus Olin

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Ferus Olin

1. Roron Corobb 17:53, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
2. Novajoe23 14:27, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
3. EAGLES610 18:52, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
4. Cull Tremayne 05:08, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
5. Adamwankenobi^{Talk to me! My home.} 05:23, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
6. Wstonefi 01:33, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
7. Nighthawk leader
8. DarthMaul431 17:58, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
9. Breathesgelatin 15:39, 2 July 2006 (UTC)

Objections

• Needs a better intro. BTS would be lovely. --UVnet 07:19, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
• Looks great, just need to expand the intro. - Breathesgelatin 14:53, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
• Yeah, it needs a longer intro. Give me a few...maybe I can whip something up. StarNeptune^{Talk to me!} 09:37, 21 June 2006 (UTC)
  • I managed to expand a bit from what info I gathered from the article, but since I've never read any of the books he's featured in, I didn't go into too much detail. Anyway, check it out and see if it satisfies any objections or if it needs more work. StarNeptune^{Talk to me!} 10:17, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

Comments

• The Return to Coruscant section really needs to be divided into smaller sections. A casual reader is going to be totally turned off by that enormous chunk of (no offense) boring wording. Also, the two other pictures of Ferus from Death on Naboo and School of Fear are just begging to be added. It would really help the appeal of the article if those were added. Cull Tremayne 23:52, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Added the images, but I'll let someone else tackle breaking down that big section. —Jaymach Ral'Tir (talk) 13:33, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
    • I divided the section. I wrote almost all of it, so I was familiar with where there are logical breaking points. --Novajoe23 14:27, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
      • I guess now I should support it then. Great job, dang you guys are fast. Cull Tremayne