Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Farquil Ban'n

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Farquil Ban'n

(0 Inqs/2 Users/2 Total)

Support

  1. Fourdot has too many FAnoms! We should Ban'n him! Menkooroo (talk) 03:04, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Protectorate (talk) 00:15, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Lady Madonna
  • You're over the redlink limit! Honestly, though, I don't think we need articles on "briefcase" and "straw hat." De-linking those is my suggested course of action.
    • You speak wisdom.
  • Hutt Cartel is infobox-exclusive --- do we know for sure that Embra was part of the Cartel, or is that just extrapolation based on his Huttness?
    • Hmm. It was inherited from the original article. I have turfed it.
  • "Embra and yet another Hutt, Malta paid tribute to Jabba at the palace, and joined him for a game of dejarik while Ban'n joined Jabba's majordomo, Bib Fortuna and Malta's handmaiden, Jozzel Moffet in watching from the sidelines, waiting for their masters to call on them." A long-winded sentence with a lot of commas. Can you rephrase?
    • Split the sentence.
  • Can you also name the planet on which Jabba's Palace is located?
    • Done.
  • Also, any more details on Embra's residence? Even if the planet isn't known, can you say anything at all about its location?
    • Absolutely not, we just see that she's on a beach and... that's it. Unfortunately.
      • Sorry, not the beach --- Embra's residence, where they first meet with Zuckuss and 4-LOM.
        • Crap, had a brain fart -- still no, unfortunately. There are only interiors. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 02:57, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • Is the Hunt for the Yavin Vassilika (event) worth an article?
    • Not sure. I'm not sure that it would be distinct from any other bounty, other than the fact that the target is inanimate. There is no concerted operation to speak of.
      • Good point about it being a bounty.
  • The separate "Equipment" section seems a tad clunky, being so short. It might be worth merging that info into "Appearance and attire."
    • Merged.
  • Good work. Except for the constant claims that Yavin 4 is a planet. What's up with that??? Menkooroo (talk) 01:36, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
Farquil Banhammer
  • Can we have some context on Embra the Hutt to start? Was he a crime lord or what? You never actually say who he is.
  • Really the same thing for all the other Hutts you mention.
  • Gonna need context on Fett, Bossk and Solo in the intro. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:35, December 26, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote I think we know the drill with these by now. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 07:01, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 07:02, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 09:04, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 21:07, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:18, January 19, 2014 (UTC)