Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Etahn A'baht

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Etahn A'baht

  • Nomination by: - Havac 06:22, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Summer work, now getting nommed. And pretty short. Havac 06:22, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

(5 Inqs/1 users/6 total)

Support

  1. DC 01:43, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:08, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote —Xwing328(Talk) 21:33, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 13:52, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:15, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 21:32, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Object

    • "A'baht and Ackbar worked hard to convince her" Worked hard seems to be an overstatement, as well as a bit POVish.
      • They worked hard to convince her. They were not indifferent. I don't really see how it's POV. Havac 00:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
    • "A prolonged state of cold war existed between Dornea and the dominant galactic power, in which A'baht kept the Empire from Dornea" Something seems to be missing near the end from the sentence...
      • He kept them from Dornea, as in he kept them off it. Havac 00:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
    • First, you say A'baht was promoted to general, then you say he commanded the Dornean Nav. Please clarify the contrast here.
      • It's inherent in the sources. He was commanding the navy before he got the promotion. Not much we can do. Havac 00:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
    • Could at least give a little bit of context for Luke?
      • How do you mean? Havac 00:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
    • Is the triple ref'ing in the BtS necessary? Naming the trilogy kind of self sources it, and the other ref'ing isn't needed either.
      • Well, I don't think it hurts. I just source everything. Havac 00:14, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
    • Great article Havac. DC 22:10, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
      • Objections resolved via IRC discussion with Havac. DC 01:43, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
  2. Xwing328:
    • This sentence isn't quite complete: "A strike at Doornik-319 would provide a distraction the day before the attack, and strikes at Wakiza, Tizon, Z'fell, and the recently-discovered shipyards at Tholaz simultaneously with the attack on N'zoth."
      • Completed. Havac 20:41, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
    • All of the quotes are extremely long. Consider trimming them down some, and don't consider this an actual objection. —Xwing328(Talk) 19:52, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
      • Long but good, and not too long, I think. I couldn't find a good way to trim any down without feeling like I was losing something. Havac 20:41, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
    • Provide links for prowlers and ferrets.
      • Linked. Havac 20:58, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
    • Should Zone Nineteen be linked? If not, provide some explanation about what it is.
      • Linked. Havac 20:58, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
    • Operation Strong Hand: "Soon after Solo's rescue…" You don't mention how he's rescued until later so this bit seems a little confusing. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:29, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
      • Fixed. Havac 20:58, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • Aw, you couldn't work in a quote of Cundertol's hilarious racism? -- Darth Culator (Talk) 00:57, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
    • Unfortunately, I couldn't find a good fit. That needs to be QOTD'd, though. Havac 21:22, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:32, 10 November 2008 (UTC)