Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Eleventh Brother

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Eleventh Brother

• Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 18:46, 4 May 2025 (UTC) NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:50, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The first Inquisitor FAN in Dani's WP:INQ, was a very fun one to write Lewisr (talk) 18:46, 4 May 2025 (UTC) NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:49, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 16:58, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1529 words (175 introduction, 780 body, 574 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1509 words (176 introduction, 774 body, 559 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ambition, WP:Collab, WP:The Clone Wars

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support votes

1. Huzzah to WP:Inq! Dani, is researching for this why you found all those S-Mine Detonator sources? :) Wok142 (talk) 05:42, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
2. Mor9347 ^(Talk) 06:16, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
3. Objection handled via Discord.—spookywilloww^talk 20:09, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
4. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 02:33, 16 May 2025 (UTC)
5. Brandon Rhea^(talk)(he/him/his) 16:03, 16 May 2025 (UTC)
6. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 15:54, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
7. Gonky1138 (talk) 16:09, 17 May 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Wok

• It doesn't feel most accurate to describe Ahsoka as a Jedi in all of this - either former Jedi or Force-Sensitive Outcast would be more precise
  • We established her as a former Padawan/Jedi now NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 23:47, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
• I don't think that the word chest should be linked to breast. Wok142 (talk) 19:31, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
  • That form of linking is precedent, Dancing-girl costume, Yisbon Minor, Unidentified Twi'lek male server, are just some that do Lewisr (talk) 22:54, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Un-striking this after Discord discussion, seems like a more case-by-case basis can be used for linking these per several users, and I maintain that this is a case where it does not make sense. Wok142 (talk) 23:34, 10 May 2025 (UTC)
      • Delinked Lewisr (talk) 00:46, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
• The village is described as a "farming village" in the Topps card. That feels like a good detail to add.
  • Added in and cited Lewisr (talk) 23:30, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
• This article seems to have a clearer version of the first image in the Concept Art Gallery. Wok142 (talk) 22:01, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
  • That was a great find! Thank you! Implemented NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 23:27, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Supersus64

• Context for Marrok in BTS is needed.
  • Done. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:11, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
• It may also be worth noting that Leland Chee also maintains the Holocron continuity database in addition to being part of the Lucasfilm Story Group.
  • Added. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:11, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
• Descriptions of what is depicted in each concept art would be nice. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 17:13, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
  • I changed mention of concept art being created for the Inquisitor to "of," which is all I really think is needed for that one. The Ahsoka one is mentioned in the paragraph above Lewisr (talk) 18:16, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Sorry, no, I was referring to the captions in the concept art gallery. Something like "Concept art of the Eleventh Brother and Ahsoka Tano in a burning village" and "Concept art of the Eleventh Brother's wardrobe by Chris Madden." SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 18:54, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
      • Discussed this with Dani, and we didn't agree that that full on caption descriptions should be done, but did tweak the Inquisitor one to match with the slide caption on SW.com Lewisr (talk) 19:37, 14 May 2025 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Do we have a source explicitly calling the track on the soundtrack the Inquisitor's theme? If not, it's best not to assume that's the intent. The track itself just sounds like it's scoring the scene with the Inquisitor, not acting as a theme. If we can't confirm it's a theme, I'd just reword to saying there is a track on the soundtrack titled "The Inquisitor." Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 06:16, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Tweaked the wording to note it was just a track Lewisr (talk) 06:26, 17 May 2025 (UTC)

Comments

• Had a lot of fun writing this with Lew. First of many Inqs to come. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:49, 4 May 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:57, 17 May 2025 (UTC)