Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Eclipse (ship)

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Eclipse (ship)

(5 Inqs/4 Users/9 Total)

Support

1. Lord Hydronium 08:40, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
2. I don't think it gets any better than this. Darthchristian ^(Hey!) 17:06, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
3. Cull Tremayne 04:35, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
4. Chack Jadson ^Talk 19:27, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
5. Even if it is shorter than the Saxtonised Super Star Destroyer. Thefourdotelipsis 07:57, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
6. Excellent read. Greyman^(Paratus) 14:00, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
7. Unit 8311 17:05, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
8. It's not the size, but how you use it...--Goodwood 05:17, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
9. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 11:45, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the fjord of Imperialles:
   • The large amount of images makes the article look cluttered. Can we remove some? (Criteria 15)
   • Quotes: Remove excessive links per WP:MOS.
   • BTS: "Eclipse is also the name of a server—or "Galaxy"—in Star Wars Galaxies." Relevance?
   • Thank you. --Imperialles 20:02, 1 September 2007 (UTC)
2. Here are a few objections to this nom
   • More information in the intro about how Palpatine lost control of the Force Storm, causing the ship's destruction.
     • Added. - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
       • I meant a bit of info on how Luke and Leia caused him to lose control of it. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 19:39, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
         • Added a bit from the EGVV that hopefully clears it up a bit. - Lord Hydronium 21:46, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
           • I suppose that works. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 22:59, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
3. *In Specifications, change "midships" to midship.
   • • Actually, I think "midships" is right here, since it's an adverb modifying "sat". - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
       • "Approximately midships sat the fore launch bay and hangar"? That doesn't seem right to me. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 19:39, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
         • Reworded to be less awkward. - Lord Hydronium 21:46, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
   • What is the Consortium? There is no mention of it at all until the battle between it, the Rebels, and the Empire in which Zann and his men steal the Eclipse.
     • Addressed. - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
   • A little bit on how Luke Skywalker became Imperial Commander. To a casual reader, it may not make sense.
     • Addressed, though as briefly as I could, since I didn't want to distract too much from the point. - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
       • That works, I only wanted a little bit. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 19:39, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Luke "gave the battle to the New Republic"? This should be reworded.
     • Addressed. - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Per Imperialles on images and BTS.
     • Addressed. - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
   • These objections are just the tip of the iceberg, but this article strikes me as just a little bit too low on detail in the prose to be of FA quality. Try to expand it a little bit. Despite that, though, the sourcing is excellent. Good work, but not quite up to FA quality in my opinion. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 06:44, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Besides the above, any other examples of things that need fleshing out? - Lord Hydronium 10:41, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
       • Just a general impression. I'll take another look at it, and see if I can find anything more, though. Until then, don't consider that an objection. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 19:39, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
         • Never mind, nothing serious. It just seemed that way after my first read. Good work. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 23:00, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

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