- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Drogen Hosh
- Nominated by: Jinzler 21:58, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A Separatist commander
(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
- Thefourdotelipsis 01:13, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
Xicer9
(Combadge) 16:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)- Imperialles 20:20, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 03:02, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
Very nice. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 14:40, June 11, 2010 (UTC)- Drogen means drugs in German. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:22, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
- Will be 'Inqapproved' in about 45 minutes. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 20:33, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xicer likes seeing RPGA on the FAN page
Intro: "He participated in the Clone Wars and commanded Separatist forces in an attack on the Mid Rim planet Argul." Although you mention the Clone Wars, it should probably still be mentioned that the attack was against the Republic.- Mentioned it --Jinzler 15:32, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
Intro: "The following morning, Hosh contacted a group of Jedi Padawans who were leading Republic forces on the mesa, and attempted to broker a ceasefire with them." Why? You go from saying he launched an attack to him issuing a call for a ceasefire. Please clarify.- Clarified, also clarified this a bit more in the bio as well --Jinzler
- That's it actually, the body is solid. Keep up the great work. Xicer9(Combadge) 23:41, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:58, June 13, 2010 (UTC)