Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Drigor Tarrens

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Drigor Tarrens

(5 Inqs/1 User/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Very clean. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:31, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Infidel! Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:21, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
  3. Ozzel 21:50, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:25, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:11, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Clean as a typical Cav One DarkStryder Whistle, and just as interesting as always. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 05:56, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Toprawa:
    • I think I'm correct in implying here that the Confederation charged him with treason for using cybernetics, which clashed with their views of bio technology. I would like to see a wee bit added here to explain that the Confederation charged him with treason for this violation: "Charged with treason, which was punishable by death,"
      • That's the conclusion I get from reading his bio, but the problem is that it is never explicitly stated to be the case. As a result, I am loath to add it since it is close to speculation.
    • Again, please do a bit to clarify why he is being charged with treason: "He was summoned to appear before a court on the charge of treason upon waking from surgery" Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:31, 9 August 2008 (UTC)
      • No other information is given, but it probably relates to the above comments. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 15:36, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
        • In regards to both objections, yes, as you describe it, that would unfortunately be speculation. Very well. I won't hold it up on this, but would it be safe to add a little bit specifying that the Confederation charged him, in both instances here? Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:25, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
  2. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • "Tarrens studied one of the branches of science" Could we be a little more specific? Or at least reword it.
      • No specifics are available - reworded to "Tarrens studied science".
    • Contextify the location of that final space battle. Is it near the space station?
      • Context added.
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 23:51, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

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