Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Diblen Harleys

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Diblen Harleys

• Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:17, March 15, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I see Iceman as the image for this guy. No idea why.

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:28, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
2. ~Savage 23:18, April 30, 2013 (UTC)
3. Cade Calrayn 23:52, May 23, 2013 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:10, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:54, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
6. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:12, June 26, 2013 (UTC)
7. JangFett ^(Talk) 02:43, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd has one thing

• Intro: "his father revealed the true nature of the Empire to him." Which was...? IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:48, March 18, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 00:53, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Savaged…

• One minor nitpick: Can the last sentence of the intro be reworded so that the verb comes much sooner? As it is now, the sentence is almost over before we get to the main verb. Might work to just put something like, "His cooperation aided an investigation into blah blah blah" or something like that. Otherwise, solid as usual. ~Savage 11:22, April 24, 2013 (UTC)
  • Cut down and rejigged. Thanks for the review. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:29, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Two quick ones. First, is there enough information to create an article for the shipyards at Ord Trasi (perhaps Ord Trasi shipyards), instead of just linking the general shipyards article?
  • Yes. Yes there is.
• Given what's stated in the Bts, it would appear that in the Sources, it should be specified that The Last Command Sourcebook identified his first name for the first time, since his surname was already known (i.e. {{1stID|Diblen}} instead of just {{1stID}}). CC7567 ^(talk) 20:45, June 14, 2013 (UTC)
  • Corrected. Thanks for the review. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 19:26, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 02:43, July 10, 2013 (UTC)