Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Darth Kruhl

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Darth Kruhl

• Nominated by: —Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 18:23, 13 February 2009 (UTC)

• Nomination comments: 'Cause I would never be that Kruhl to you…oh no, no, oh no—don't be Kruhl.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Grunny ^(Talk) 21:28, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
2. Harrar 23:47, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
3. There are a lot of minor Sith in Krayt's order that end up dying. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:37, 12 April 2009 (UTC)
4. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:28, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
5. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:25, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
6. Thefourdotelipsis 01:36, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Harrar will be Kruhl to be kind…
   • "displayed" his blaster pistol (in the intro) reads like Fel showed Kruhl the weapon and allowed him to review it etc. Can we use another verb here?
     • Addressed.
   • When you say that Kruhl "cut Rikkar-du down", it gets confusing when the Codru-ji seems to remain alive for a few more clauses. Clarify the process of Rikkar-du's defeat and change the verb.
     • Good catch. Addressed.
   • More context needed on Roan Fel and the Empire-in-exile in the second section; compared to the info in the intro its somewhat lacking.
     • Actually, I felt as though what was there was enough, but I did add a tad bit more. Please check it out, & see if it suffices.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 01:02, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Any info on how Kruhl gains entry to the Pellaeon gardens? Or how Fel detects Kruhl's presence? Please Contextify/clarify if possible.
     • Unfortunately, there is none. The next time we see Kruhl upon his arrival on Bastion, he's got his lightsaber raised to strike Fel down.
   • Nice stuff. -- Harrar 23:05, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Appreciate the review, Harrar. Please advise if anything further is required.
       • Naw that's all good. -- Harrar 23:47, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
2. I believe that it was Vikar Dorn's son who captained the Dauntless, not Dorn himself. Could you check this and amend if necessary? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:50, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Hey, Cav. You are correct with Dorn's son being the captain of Dauntless, but it was Dorn himself that was assigned to assist Kruhl. For the mission, the senior Dorn commanded the Dauntless. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 01:02, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Nothing further needed. Obviously I was misremembering :) - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:28, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
3. I think you go a bit far beyond Kruhl's death at the end there, with Maladi telling Krayt that Kruhl was a decoy. You've already told us this earlier on. Thefourdotelipsis 23:39, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
   • How's that?
     • Still too much. I think the best thing to do would be to turf that final sentence altogether. Thefourdotelipsis 22:04, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
       • Done.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 00:26, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
4. "Not to be hindered, Kruhl instead unleashed a barrage of Force lightning against Fel, which he managed to absorb with his lightsaber." You link absorb to Force Absorb but it sounds like it was just with his lightsaber rather than with a Force power. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 13:49, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed. Thanks for the review, GT. Please advise if anything further is required.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 19:47, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:36, 20 April 2009 (UTC)