Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Darth Bane (second nomination)

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Darth Bane

• Nominated by: Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:46, 27 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Long have I waited…
• WookieeProject (optional): WookieeProject: The Clone Wars

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Support

1. Welcome baaaaaaaaack! UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:11, 20 December 2021 (UTC)
2. Awesome! JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:26, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
3. Per above! :P OOM 224 00:44, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
4. Welcome back! Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 22:44, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
5. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 22:59, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
6. Welcome back Anil! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:12, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
7. MasterFred(talk) 23:56, 1 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Welcome back, Anil! I believe the only interaction we've had before was when you reviewed my first nom some time ago, so I thought I'd return the favour here :P
  • "a pattern that nearly all Sith repeated afterward" — could clarify what "pattern" refers to here, since readers might think that it means dueling on the planet Ambria specifically.
  • I think the part about Force Priestesses in the BTS can safely be considered canonical information and thus moved to the Biography section.
  • For the Darth Bane Trilogy, I don't see a need to list the individual novels of the series.
  • Context for Mortis? OOM 224 17:45, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
    • Handled via Discord OOM 224 22:15, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Did Sidious write more than one book in his lifetime? That would determine whether or not there needs to be a comma before The Secrets of the Sith.
• First Order should be connected to Snoke and Ren. Right now, it's introduced out of nowhere.
• Infobox says "Pale" skin while P&T says "fair."
• Air date for "Sacrifice" should be included, but I don't feel as strongly about it for "Ghosts of Mortis."
• Precedent is to cite the latest edition of a book if it still holds all the info from the older edition(s) (e.g. Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition). UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:21, 13 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Addressed via Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:32, 19 December 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• This looks really great, Anil. Just one thing from me: the bts does not make clear that Sacrifice was Bane's first canonical appearance in the new Star Wars canon. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:49, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Addressed. And thank you :) Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:09, 23 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 23:56, 1 January 2022 (UTC)