- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Daeshara'cor
- Nominated by: -- —Harrar
(Villip) 21:37, 22 April 2009 (UTC) - Nomination comments: What with the Triage process bringing FANs down to a record low, I figured ole Daeshara wouldn't cause too much of a stir.
(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)
Support
Thefourdotelipsis 23:42, 4 May 2009 (UTC)- --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:25, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:15, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 01:08, 16 June 2009 (UTC)- Great read, Harrar. Grunny (Talk) 07:06, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:12, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Object
IMHO: The quote opening "Death over Ithor" should specify who says each line. I had to look for a name, reach line 7, assume that the name Anakin is a vocative so it must have been said by the other party, and then re-read the quote to see who says the first line. Btw: Great article! -Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:25, 24 April 2009 (UTC)- I removed the top lines because a) I felt the quote was a bit too long and cumbersome b) It would have really suffered to have had Daeshara'cor and Anakin Solo in front of every line. I do agree that it was vague, however, so I strimmed it down so the first line is Daeshara'cor saying "Anakin" so it's more obvious. Is this okay? -- —Harrar (Villip) 08:52, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
- Perfect, thanks. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:33, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
- I removed the top lines because a) I felt the quote was a bit too long and cumbersome b) It would have really suffered to have had Daeshara'cor and Anakin Solo in front of every line. I do agree that it was vague, however, so I strimmed it down so the first line is Daeshara'cor saying "Anakin" so it's more obvious. Is this okay? -- —Harrar
- From the Desk of Atarumaster88
I've never seen Darksaber italicized. Please consult canon and confirm this.- Ce n'est canon pas. It is no longer italicised.
BTS needs referencing on Stackpole's interview. Please reference the entire second paragraph.- Sourced to the interview; I removed this bit — "The Durron and Skywalker divide was an over-arching element in The New Jedi Order series and Daeshara'cor provided a look at the plotline from the "rogue Jedi" angle." — as upon review it seemed a bit OR-y. I can put it back in if you don't have a problem with it.
- I prefer the bit to stay removed if there's no source specifically. Looks good. :) Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 01:08, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- I prefer the bit to stay removed if there's no source specifically. Looks good. :) Atarumaster88
- Sourced to the interview; I removed this bit — "The Durron and Skywalker divide was an over-arching element in The New Jedi Order series and Daeshara'cor provided a look at the plotline from the "rogue Jedi" angle." — as upon review it seemed a bit OR-y. I can put it back in if you don't have a problem with it.
- Otherwise clean. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 16:28, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks as always Ataru :) -- —Harrar (Cut the comm chatter) 22:41, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
Comments
- I tried new things — but if my short paragraphs are too short though then let me know. -- —Harrar (Villip) 21:37, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
- Also, despite the fact that Ruin makes it clear that Daeshara does not quite fall to the dark side, the reference guides claim she does, and therefore I left her in the Fallen Jedi and Redeemed Jedi category despite the blatant contradictions. -- —Harrar (Villip) 21:42, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 10:12, 17 June 2009 (UTC)