- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Crimson Jack
- Nominated by: -- Cull Tremayne 02:06, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This might have some awkward wording.
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Support
Atarumaster88 
(Talk page) 03:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC)- Greyman(Talk) 09:20, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
Jaina Solo(Talk) 20:19, 21 October 2008 (UTC)- You might want to mention that he was a bit gullible in falling for Han's ruses more than once, and the term "was able to" was a tad overused, but otherwise excellent. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 20:33, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Removed a few of the "was able to"s, at least so that there's no more than one per section header. I'm reluctant to call him gullible, since he tricked Solo a couple times as well. Cull Tremayne 11:20, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- Best. Outfit. Ever. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 02:44, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
Object
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
"A short time after releasing Solo, Jack and his crew made another high profile capture, Princess Leia Organa, who was on a mission to rescue the Rebel hero, Luke Skywalker, who had been lost in the Drexel system, found her ship caught in the tractor beam of Crimson Jack." Bit of a run-on; not sure on the best fix here.- Wow, now that is ugly. Reworded.
- Otherwise clean aside from some small tweaks. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 02:57, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. :D Cull Tremayne 03:02, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:00, 11 November 2008 (UTC)