Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Corwin Shelvay/Legends

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Corwin Shelvay

(6 Inqs/1 User/7 Total)

Support

1. Lord Hydronium 08:19, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 12:22, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
3. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:15, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
4. Ozzel 22:11, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
5. Nicely done. Greyman^(Paratus) 12:08, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
6. Gonk ^(Gonk!) 17:30, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
7. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 15:04, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

Object

• He goes from being taken hostage to jumping in to save his master. Could use some clarifying on how he managed to break free. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 15:56, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
  • That's pretty much how the story itself goes. - Lord Hydronium 20:57, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
• Insufficient internal links (Jedi Code, etc.) per MoS. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 21:29, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
  • Er, Jedi Code is linked. - Lord Hydronium 01:28, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
    • That wasn't the clearest objection I've ever made, but you didn't link to pants! The horror! Also, if an item is linked to in the intro, it doesn't need to be relinked in the biography or body section, per MoS. I fixed them all, I think. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 15:04, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 21:23, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

• Perhaps a BTS? --Eyrezer 12:22, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
• Giant infobox image is a little unsightly. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 15:56, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
  • A BTS would be nice, and the image could stand to be cropped from the bottom a bit, although it doesn't really bother me as is. -- Ozzel 22:11, 15 July 2007 (UTC)
• No more redlinks! --Eyrezer 10:55, 16 July 2007 (UTC)