Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Coburn/Legends

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Contents

  • 1 Coburn
    • 1.1 (4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 We interrupt this program
        • 1.1.2.2 Cav
        • 1.1.2.3 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Coburn

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 09:53, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A companion to Wolffe. Now, if only FAing Plo Koon was that doable.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Plagueis327 (talk) 21:58, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 22:49, September 12, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Coburn doesn't change facial expressions. Menkooroo (talk) 00:07, September 25, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:28, October 8, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:58, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 22:13, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Object

We interrupt this program
  • In the intro: "As part of the operation, Coburn brought his light cruiser dangerously close to the facility" --- this is the only time the facility is mentioned in the intro; can you link and give context?
    • Whoops; missed that. Added.
  • Can you date the Kadavo operation in the bio? It's not really clear how much time has passed. All from this one! Menkooroo (talk) 10:47, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
    • Addressed. Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 18:15, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • In 21 BBY, the second year of the war,[3] Koon's flagship, the Star Destroyer Tranquility, was destroyed by the Confederate General Grievous's battleship, the Malevolence. Although Koon, Wolffe, and their 104th Wolfpack trooper squad survived the attack,[4] Coburn could not forget the loss of the Triumphant.[1] - Which is correct? Tranquility or Triumphant? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:51, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • LOL. Should have been Triumphant. Thanks for catching that. CC7567 (talk) 18:46, October 4, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Minor, but I've noticed that in previous nominations you pipelink "decades" to Time, whereas in this article you pipelink it to Year. Please pick one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:38, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 18:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:15, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

  • Currently 1,532 words. Surprisingly a lot for a silent guy like him. CC7567 (talk) 09:53, August 5, 2012 (UTC)