Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Citadel Station

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Citadel Station

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 total}

Support

  1. As nominator--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 23:17, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
  2. Already been Pasta-bowl'd, so I give it my stamp. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:24, 22 January 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Jaina Solo(Talk) 14:07, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Looks good. Hobbes(Tiger's Lair) 02:38, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote 100% Dept. of Ataru certified content. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 04:09, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote An interesting read. Keep this project rolling :) Greyman(Paratus) 14:43, 2 February 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote —Xwing328(Talk) 01:12, 5 February 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. File:EM081.jpg, File:RM081.jpg, File:Citadelarrival.jpg—would it be possible to grab some higher-res versions of these? File:Citport.jpg and File:Citcit2.jpg are fairly poorly compressed and need to be reuploaded. --Imperialles 21:12, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
    • Unfortunately, only the first two images cam be retaken (and have been done, as has File:Citadelatnight.jpg). The rest are, near as I can tell, as good as they're going to get given the resolution of the movies in the game. And, truth be told, the "high-resolution" films in the updated media pack referenced in the BtS are basically blow-ups, with no improvement to quality.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 22:17, 23 January 2008 (UTC)
      • Okay, I see what you meant by the last images. The resolution isn't higher, but the quality is; they're uncompressed.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 12:58, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
        • Not to be a boat-rocker, but Imp, those image objections have been resolved for a solid week. Please advise.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 01:09, 31 January 2008 (UTC)
  2. From the lair of Hobbes15
    • "Over time, the corporation intertwined itself into vital areas of the project, gradually marginalizing the efforts of the Ithorian herd, led by Chodo Habat, using loopholes within the law and their own hired mercenaries to take over restoration zones with the intended purpose of salvaging technology from them." Seems like a bit of a run-on to me.
      • Addressed.
    • "...however, they were required to remain on the station itself until the Republic performed its own investigation, and, though it went unsaid, to possibly detain the Exile as well.[2]" Something's wrong here. (2.3)
      • Addressed -- removed that clause.
    • In 2.4, a bit of info on what Nihilus's "hunger" is might be good for readers who don't know much about KOTOR.
      • Addressed.
    • In general, 2.4 is pretty vague about the battle's result; it never says what happens after the reinforcements arrive to engage the Sith fleet.
      • Addressed, added Main Article link to battle.
    • Hobbes(Tiger's Lair) 03:34, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • There is any number of information that may or may not be irrelevant in the intro about a lot of context information in such as the Supreme Chancellor's name and Onasi's wife. Per Wookieepedia:What is a featured article?, "No information should be presented in the introduction that is not addressed in the main body of the article." This is primarily for sourcing reasons, therefore the information should be removed or added also in the history section if pertinent.
      • Bada-bing
    • "Larger and better-equipped than their inter-module counterparts, the hangars within dock modules were intended to service various types of ships that were bound for Telos, carrying supplies, new crew, and resources for the Restoration Project as well as the space-to-surface transports that were tasked with bringing them to and from the various restoration zones." This sentence is long and unwieldy.
      • Bada-bang
    • "It was also during this time that the Exile asked Grenn about securing a new supply of fuel for Citadel Station, a task which she agreed to perform." Clarify this please. The last antecedent is unclear.
      • Bada-boom
    • I seem to recall Mandalore also brought Mandalorians to the defense to Telos and Citadel Station. I could be wrong.
      • rimshot
    • Please reword the intro to state that Citadel's success/restoration of Telos was completed was only a prediction by Kreia, unless confirmed to be true.
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 20:39, 29 January 2008 (UTC)
  4. From Xwing328:
    • The section "Mismanagement" has an obviously negative POV towards Czerka.
    • "...launched an ultimately fatal attempt to kill the Exile..." makes it sound like the Exile and her party were killed, but wasn't it the impostor that died? —Xwing328(Talk) 21:15, 4 February 2008 (UTC)
  5. A few quotation mark errors. --Imperialles 19:43, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 19:41, 6 February 2008 (UTC)