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Chrag'mak'al
(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
- -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 15:27, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
Thefourdotelipsis 00:31, 28 October 2007 (UTC)- Chack Jadson (Talk) 01:34, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
—Graestan (This party's over) 14:38, 29 October 2007 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:26, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
Imperialles 19:28, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
Cull Tremayne 23:49, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
The infobox image needs to be cropped to remove the black line across the top.--Eyrezer 02:22, 24 October 2007 (UTC)- From the fjord of Imperialles:
Introduction: "notorious" is POV.- Addressed.
Introduction: "Unknown fate" statements are discouraged.- Didn't know that, but yeah, fixed.
Early life: A bit too much info on Yag'Dhul, there. Far too much info on the Givin in general as well.- Cut down a lot of it.
- --Imperialles 19:44, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comments and input -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 19:50, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
Comments
Approved by Inquisitorius 23:54, 5 November 2007 (UTC)
- Created from a redlink. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 15:27, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
- Minor, but could you possibly expand the "Fractal heresy" stuff? Is it stated what that exactly was? If so please add it. And as a side note, there's no page for that. Should there be one (I know that's irrelevant to this article's FA status)? Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:35, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
- No more info on that one I'm afraid. I've linked it anyway. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 20:22, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
- Minor, but could you possibly expand the "Fractal heresy" stuff? Is it stated what that exactly was? If so please add it. And as a side note, there's no page for that. Should there be one (I know that's irrelevant to this article's FA status)? Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:35, 23 October 2007 (UTC)