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Chin
- Nominated by: Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 11:58, July 3, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments: I wasn't intending to go this far, but hey-ho. Zahn goodness!
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Support
--Eyrezer (talk) 13:15, July 5, 2012 (UTC)- Plagueis327 (talk) 19:14, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
- JangFett (Talk) 17:19, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:24, August 7, 2012 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 02:53, August 19, 2012 (UTC)- Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:11, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Jangeth
For the two sources—A Guide to the Star Wars Universe (Second Edition) and A Guide to the Star Wars Universe (Third Edition)—I think they could follow the old CT that shows how to format them correctly. IIRC, I remember that I questioned a DarkStryder source that had a parenthesis title, but I was incorrect about formatting it to the CT format. That's all from me. JangFett (Talk) 17:33, August 3, 2012 (UTC)- Should be formatted correctly now. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 22:18, August 4, 2012 (UTC)
- Should be formatted correctly now. - Cavalier One
Attack of the Clone
Maybe it's just me, but I'm having trouble affixing the "Thrawn Crisis" quote caption to the speakers. Are all three of them speaking in that quote, in the order you introduce them? If not, I would suggest using {{Dialogue}} to help make it clearer.- Actually, there's only two speakers; Karrde and Pellaeon. Chin is the guy Karrde is sending out to meet the Imperials. I've edited the description to eliminate reference to Chin to avoid confusion.
"tangled with the Chimaera": any event to be linked here?- None that I can find. I can create a redlink for one, no problem, but I'll have to wait until I can research it a little to find a suitable title.
- Please do if possible. CC7567 (talk) 20:05, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
- Added redlink for Imperial ambush near Jomark. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 00:58, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Added redlink for Imperial ambush near Jomark. - Cavalier One
- Please do if possible. CC7567 (talk) 20:05, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
- None that I can find. I can create a redlink for one, no problem, but I'll have to wait until I can research it a little to find a suitable title.
Who's Wadewarn and Zakarisz Ghent?- Clarified.
Who's Lachton?- Clarified.
Corvis?- Clarified.
What position did Leia Organa Solo hold at the time that you mention her?- Added.
Who's Odonnl? Since the only place you mention him is in that quote caption, context for him should go there.- Clarified.
Who's Booster Terrik?- Clarified.
Since you mention Palpatine, when exactly did the bombardment of Caamas take place?CC7567 (talk) 19:53, August 16, 2012 (UTC)- Info on hand shows 19 BBY, and I've added that and referenced it to Coruscant Nights II which includes a news report on the event. However, I will double check my other sources when available and amend if necessary. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:34, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
- Info on hand shows 19 BBY, and I've added that and referenced it to Coruscant Nights II which includes a news report on the event. However, I will double check my other sources when available and amend if necessary. - Cavalier One
Green Tentacle
"…Chin was present with Jade and several of Karrde's other associates—Wadewarn, and Zakarisz Ghent…" Two of them isn't several. Is there an "including" missing?- Ah, no, several should be two. Changed.
"In response, he deployed a force of stormtroopers and Chariot LAVs to Hyllyard City to wait for the survivors to leave the jungle before the Chimaera left orbit." This reads like the Chimaera only left orbit after the survivors left the jungle.Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:00, August 18, 2012 (UTC)- Hopefull corrected with a little sentence rejig. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 00:58, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Hopefull corrected with a little sentence rejig. - Cavalier One
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:11, August 19, 2012 (UTC)