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Celot Ratua Dil
- Nominated by: Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:32, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: He is Teh Roxxor!
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Support
—Xwing328(Talk) 00:21, 11 November 2008 (UTC)- Short and well-done. Cull Tremayne 08:41, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:27, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
Thefourdotelipsis 12:06, 25 November 2008 (UTC)- - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:10, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
Object
- From the cockpit of Xwing328:
Did it really say he was Force-sensitive? Also, you may want to add a P&A section to explain how he used his fast reflexes in classes with Stihl.- There's not enough for a whole section, IMO, so I added a paragraph in P&T. In regard to your first point, I would have sworn the book explicitly said he was Force-sensitive, but looking through it, all I could find was that it was very strongly implied. I think I might remove the bit about him being Force-sensitive, as it's somewhat of an interpretation. Advice from someone with knowledge on Death Star would be appreciated. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- You're probably thinking of Nova Stihl, who discovers he is Force-sensitive. Stihl was the one who passed out when Alderaan was destroyed, and said he had a power he called "Blink," or anticipating people's moves during fights. (I had to go look this up, too, because I didn't remember it). —Xwing328(Talk) 20:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- I think I am. The Force-sensitive stuff has been removed. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:43, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- You're probably thinking of Nova Stihl, who discovers he is Force-sensitive. Stihl was the one who passed out when Alderaan was destroyed, and said he had a power he called "Blink," or anticipating people's moves during fights. (I had to go look this up, too, because I didn't remember it). —Xwing328(Talk) 20:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- There's not enough for a whole section, IMO, so I added a paragraph in P&T. In regard to your first point, I would have sworn the book explicitly said he was Force-sensitive, but looking through it, all I could find was that it was very strongly implied. I think I might remove the bit about him being Force-sensitive, as it's somewhat of an interpretation. Advice from someone with knowledge on Death Star would be appreciated. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
Maybe add a bit about the Hard Heart Cantina, since most of the story takes place there.—Xwing328(Talk) 00:13, 9 November 2008 (UTC)- I added a small bit, but there's not much to say. Is there anything specific you'd like? Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Maybe something about who owns it, where it's located on the Death Star, etc. Just a tiny bit of context. —Xwing328(Talk) 20:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Added that info. Thanks. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:43, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- Maybe something about who owns it, where it's located on the Death Star, etc. Just a tiny bit of context. —Xwing328(Talk) 20:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- I added a small bit, but there's not much to say. Is there anything specific you'd like? Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
Rather a minor point but the capitalization of "destruction" of Alderaan/Despayre is inconsistent. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:29, 24 November 2008 (UTC)- Fixed. Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:14, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- One source, no pictures. There is a reference, but that's an external link. He goes by Ratua in the novel, so that's why he's called that and not Dil. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:32, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:10, 25 November 2008 (UTC)