Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Capture of Harte Secur

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Capture of Harte Secur

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:48, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This is the version of Phantom Menace I want to see
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Video Games

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:27, 11 April 2022 (UTC)
2. — Samonic 15:00, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 08:31, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 06:05, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
5. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:21, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
6. Very interesting work with the BTS. NanoLuuke^{Cloning facility} 10:52, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
7. Nice work! —Tomotron^{Star Forge} 11:19, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
8. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:55, 11 July 2022 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Duplicate ref in the last paragraph of "Retrieving the program."
• This doesn't read right: "Behind them, an archway a small courtyard with a large archway led into the main courtyard of Harte Secur....".
• If the game capitalizes nouns like "Steadfast" and "Tuskcat Trooper," then that should be reflected here.
• Units provided where?: "However, the strategy guide describes the level as a seek-and-destroy mission that can be completed with only the units provided."
• Would like the previous mission named, and the fact that it's in the same campaign mentioned as well: "Nute Gunray informs OOM-9 that EEK-176, a droid from the previous mission....." UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:39, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
  • All done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:18, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• The title is conjectural, yet you use {{1stID}} in Appearances. What's going on here? OOM 224 07:37, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Template there by mistake. Removed Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:31, 2 June 2022 (UTC)

SE

• "Their initial attack successfully destroyed Naboo's offworld communications equipment," Was the communications equipment offworld, or was it equipment used to communicate offworld?
  • Done
    • Made a small tweak.
• Can you make a slight tweak to this sentence to clarify that it was the technician that was loaded into the tank, not the viceroy? "Gunray ordered OOM-9 to protect the technician at all costs, and he was loaded into OOM-9's AAT for protection." Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 04:43, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Done, though its a bit awkward Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:43, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Played around with it a bit, how does that look? Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 05:44, 11 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Reviewing note: Found lots of missing links and spelling mistakes. Gotta be careful with this in the future. UberSoldat93 (talk)
• Don't forget to add Category:Images of Aurebesh when an image present text in Aurebesh (fixed). Also... I just realised that <pre></pre> does not format text like it did before, wish was very useful on Aurebesh transliteration in image's description. Most likely a result of one of the recent software update, I already left a note about this on the fandom channel on Discord. NanoLuuke^{Cloning facility} 10:52, 11 July 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 11:54, 11 July 2022 (UTC)