Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/CC-3636

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CC-3636

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 07:55, September 29, 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Virtually the last project I can do before Cad Bane bogs me down.

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 00:06, October 4, 2009 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 23:18, October 10, 2009 (UTC)
  3. Good job, CC.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:34, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote—Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG (No truth in me) 05:45, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
  5. Excellent.--Sean Red 14:36, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 02:08, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 04:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Tommy:
    • In the intro you call Plo Koon both a Jedi General and a High Jedi General, despite the distinctions between the two. This becomes more confusing when you later refer to Anakin as also a Jedi General. Please rework this somehow. I would have done it, but I don't want to screw with the prose.
      • As I understand it, it's basically the same way that a Jedi Master is still a Knight; the latter is still the former, but it just isn't specified this way as often. I've changed it for clarity, but I don't feel that it makes a big enough factual change. CC7567 (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
    • See if you can add the last sentence of the P&T to the preceding paragraph somehow.
      • Taken care of, though they really aren't that related. CC7567 (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
    • What's up with the redlink in the Appearances section?
      • A young readers book that I've been too lazy to create an article for. I'll take care of it soon. CC7567 (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
    • That's all.—Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG (No truth in me) 05:03, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 05:39, October 29, 2009 (UTC)
  2. Something veeery minor
    • …influenced by the fear of death invoked by Ventress's beheading of one of the clones… Look at the scene closely; Ventress beheads two clones. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 20:47, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
      • Eh, fine. Fixed, and thanks. CC7567 (talk) 20:52, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)