Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bureau of Scouting and Exploration Services

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Bureau of Scouting and Exploration Services

(5 Inq/4 Users/9 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote As nominator. Single-source article. Gonk (Gonk!) 16:39, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
  2. Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 14:06, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
  3. Ozzel 21:32, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Greyman(Paratus) 03:02, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:58, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
  6. Interesting stuff! Inqvote Thefourdotelipsis 00:30, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
  7. Chack Jadson Talk 12:58, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
  8. Looks good. Unit 8311 14:16, 9 August 2007 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Lord Hydronium 21:58, 11 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

  • From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • Missions section looks all jumbled up. Stuff about finding new planets is in the Imperial entanglements section, etc.
      • Rectified.
    • Under Secretary of Scout Services should be linked and have an article
      • In compliance.
    • If Library of Systems and Request for Privacy are proper nouns, they should be linked and have articles. If not, they should be de-capped
      • Linked to articles.
    • BTS should be adjusted to reflect that other literature does exist
      • Adjustment complete.
    • Material in references section does not match the appearances or sources section.
      • Explanation added.
    • Infobox is not ref'd.
      • Ref'd.
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 15:01, 9 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 13:58, 12 August 2007 (UTC)

  • One thing I still need to do is try and get an infobox working. There's not a lot of specific info (names, dates, etc.) but I'm gonna give it a shot. Gonk (Gonk!) 16:39, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
    • It turns out the NRSS is mentioned in a couple Adventure Journals. But it's not just a Mentioned Only, so I gotta throw in REF tags all over the place. There's also just a teensy amount of content left to include from GG8. Gonk (Gonk!) 21:38, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
      • I hate to say it, but it's got five redlinks. Chack Jadson Talk 01:38, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
        • No, by all means, say it. I've cut it down to two and those last two won't be sticking around much longer either. Gonk (Gonk!) 02:06, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
  • Needs a longer intro. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:58, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
  • I presume it is also mentioned in the Scout's Dispatch in SWAJ 6? If possible, I think detailing some of Koren's exploits as an example would be beneficial to the aritcle. --Eyrezer 09:23, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
    • I added a "Notable members" section. Is that kind of what you had in mind? Gonk (Gonk!) 13:27, 3 August 2007 (UTC)
      • That is what I had in mind. I think it could be expanded more though. Do you have access to the Scouts Dispatches? --Eyrezer 06:18, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
        • I do. I'll add a sentence or two, and let someone else expand Korren's article more fully :) Gonk (Gonk!) 12:31, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
          • I'd still like to see that expanded more if possible. --Eyrezer 00:46, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
  • I moved a sentence from the intro to Creation since I think it was needed there more. Move it back if you want, but I think the Creation section starts a little abruptly without it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:27, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
  • Header refs make me sad. :-( -- Ozzel 20:33, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
    • Me too Ozzel, but that's what I was told to do. If there's a better way, I am happy to listen. Gonk (Gonk!) 20:49, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
      • No more header refs make me happy. :-) -- Ozzel 21:32, 4 August 2007 (UTC)