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Bria Tharen
Support
- Cull Tremayne 12:18, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:20, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
- .... 22:28, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
- EAGLES610 23:00, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
- Jorrel Fraajic 23:05, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
- Imp 15:15, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
Objections
Needs a better intro. By better, I mean longer. EAGLES610 21:36, 3 December 2006 (UTC)Needs intro, lacks Personality/Traits. .... 21:53, 3 December 2006 (UTC)"female Human" in the intro is obsoleted by infobox—remove it. Possible to get a higher-res version of the infobox image? An introductory quote would be nice, as well. --Imp 20:48, 13 December 2006 (UTC)- "female Human" is history. I'll have a look for a decent quote or two, but it'll take me a while to flick through the book. As for the higher res picture, I can do it if you want but the British version has A C Crispin's name written over Bria's hand so I'd have to crop the bottom off. Has anybody got a US copy of The Paradise Snare and a scanner so they can do a higher res version? Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:18, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
- A possible fix would be to crop the NEGTC image and switch the two images around. That would probably look better. --Imp 21:24, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
- Swapped the images round and added quotes aplenty. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:04, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you for your work, oh tentacled one.
Now, one last thing: "She was brought to her senses" in the intro seems POV-ish. Any way to reword it? --Imp 05:50, 19 December 2006 (UTC)- Any better? Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:57, 20 December 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you for your work, oh tentacled one.
- Swapped the images round and added quotes aplenty. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:04, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
- A possible fix would be to crop the NEGTC image and switch the two images around. That would probably look better. --Imp 21:24, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
- "female Human" is history. I'll have a look for a decent quote or two, but it'll take me a while to flick through the book. As for the higher res picture, I can do it if you want but the British version has A C Crispin's name written over Bria's hand so I'd have to crop the bottom off. Has anybody got a US copy of The Paradise Snare and a scanner so they can do a higher res version? Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:18, 13 December 2006 (UTC)
Comments
- Green Tentacle did a great job cleaning this up and expanding it. I think it's at featured article quality. Cull Tremayne 12:18, 2 December 2006 (UTC)
- Why is she on FA and GA? Atarumaster88
(Audience Chamber) 17:23, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Removed from GA. Atarumaster took care of the intro, I'll have a go at a personality bit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:18, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Right, personality bit written. Let me know what you think (or improve it yourselves, of course). Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:14, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Removed from GA. Atarumaster took care of the intro, I'll have a go at a personality bit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:18, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
- Why is she on FA and GA? Atarumaster88
