Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bom Vimdin

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Bom Vimdin

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:27, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Wordcount tells me this fella snuck over 1000 at some point without me noticing
  • Date Archived: 17:12, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1024 words (148 introduction, 636 body, 240 behind the scenes)
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(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 01:53, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 08:52, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 12:27, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
  4. Lewisr (talk) 18:03, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote See my copy-edit. Nice work! Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 01:13, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  6. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:29, 6 July 2023 (UTC)
  7. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:09, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • Birth date note needs slight refactoring per Timelines and RO now being 1 BBY.
  • Species body/infobox referencing could be made consistent.
  • Ref 10 can be swapped to Timelines; also worth investigating if there's available dating for Bounty Hunt as well.
  • If the information referenced remains the same across editions, would make sense to swap to using Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded for referencing precedent of using more recent editions.—spookywillowwtalk 20:01, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • (Reviewing note) Archive.org often successfully archives YouTube videos (which was the case for both SWKids videos here!), so it'd be better to use it instead of archive.today for YouTube.
  • (Reviewing note) References should be placed before the dashes per Wookieepedia:Sourcing#Formatting.
  • "7977 C.R.C." in the intro is currently pipelinked to "0 BBY." Just wanna make sure this is intentional and not a pre-Timelines dating.
    • Done some date updates per the new Encyclopedia that fixed this. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:39, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
  • "By 7977.44.3 C.R.C.,[2] he was wanted for crimes against the Galactic Empire […]" I don't think that reference note explains the date for Vimdin's wanted-ness. Also, can't that date be sourced directly to Scum and Villainy itself? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:58, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
    • It can just be referenced directly to Scum and Villainy so I've removed the date note from this sentence. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:39, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:11, 7 July 2023 (UTC)