Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Blitzer Harrsk

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Blitzer Harrsk

• Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 03:37, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Abbott! Laurel! Burns! Martin! Cher!

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. ...Cher? Xicer9^(Combadge) 05:02, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
2. Waiting for Delvardus... --Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
3. With a name like Blitzer, I expect the next warlord to be named Rudolph. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:35, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:19, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
5. —Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 00:06, May 24, 2010 (UTC)
6. Thefourdotelipsis 03:17, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
7. Looks sound to me, nothing really jumped out as being objectionable, and anything else was something I could fix myself. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 04:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Farlstendoiro
   • Pellaeon is overlinked.
     • That's what he gets for retreating. Fixed.
   • Context on Teradoc in his first mention. We do not know wether Teradoc is another Imperial warlord, a pirate, an officer of the New Republic, a crimelord; only that he was self-styled High Admiral.
     • He is actually called a warlord in the intro mention, but it's added to the body one now.
   • Consider adding the names of some of the other known warlords in the Tsoss Beacon meeting. Just a suggestion.
     • They aren't named, unfortunately. - Lord Hydronium 05:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
   • Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:26, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• Added CUSWE link for you.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:02, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
• Made some {{sofixit}} edits where I felt they were needed. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 04:43, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
• Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:53, May 25, 2010 (UTC)