Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bestine IV

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Bestine IV

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:31, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Lil BTC side project-turned-full blown astrography project.
• Date Archived: 20:41, 21 September 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 2831 words (442 introduction, 1932 body, 457 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:AST, WP:CO, WP:FFGAMES, WP:NOVELS, WP:SWBF, WP:SWCT, WP:TCW, WP:THR, WP:VG

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:00, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 00:05, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 03:38, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
4. Rxxxxxxxxxx (talk) 20:37, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
5. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 23:31, 19 September 2023 (UTC)
6. Congrats on this being the first FA for both WP:SWCT and WP:THR! Panther436 (talk) 20:30, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• 'Valance and T'onga exchanged, surprised at each other's allegiances.' There appears to be something missing, I'm assuming glances or looks or something?
  • Does that convey things better?
    • Great, thank you! Lewisr (talk) 19:26, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
• I believe we detail the canon BTS details first and then the Legends information, at least in regards to where the name originates Lewisr (talk) 14:42, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
  • With the ANH stuff, it's easier to order things this way. Keeps things in chronological order throughout the BtS anyways, and though I could be wrong I don't recall either practice being codified. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:51, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
    • I was under that impression based off others, but it's not a big deal. I can somewhat agree with the ANH stuff at least being established first so will strike, thanks Lewisr (talk) 19:26, 13 July 2023 (UTC)

Editor

• Now that we have tracked down helmet collection 5, we can confirm a new source with info Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:59, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Update done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:51, 15 July 2023 (UTC)

Imp

• Hmm, curious what does the map depiction of Bestine in X-Wing look like? Cause if it's just a dot with a label that wouldn't qualify as a full appearance, contrary to what the BTS currently states. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:26, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
• Mediacat, please.
• Duplicate links. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:09, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Both sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:48, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
• Please add in the BMF 52, Encyclopedia, and THR maps. :) Imperators II^(Talk) 07:53, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:03, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
• Do we know that multiple humans lived on Bestine IV? If so, I'd suggest restricting the infobox species field to just listing "Humans" and "Other species" so as not to risk potentially turning that field into a laundry list of one-off species for whom we only know a single representative.
• "Corruption in Bsellis City": "gang levels there were too strong" not sure at all what that is supposed to mean. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:47, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:32, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• You should note the alternate name "Bestine" bolded in the intro.
• Context for Jahnae in the intro.
  • Sorted. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:50, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
• I'm a bit confused by the references for "other species" in the infobox. What are the other species? Does neither source say? If not, what's the need for two references? Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 10:54, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Upon chatting with Imp, I've struck the first and third objections. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 11:29, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Couple things to note. You may notice the warrior mentioned had no article. That decision is purely from the arbitrary nature of the character, as from the book they can be a bunch of different things and can have optional company. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:31, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:40, 21 September 2023 (UTC)