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Belderone
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:30, 19 May 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A good article tipped over by word count.
- Date Archived: 19:20, 14 June 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1029 words (144 introduction, 746 body, 139 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1020 words (139 introduction, 743 body, 138 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:AST, WP:FFGAMES, WP:NOVELS
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Support votes
Assuming below sorted.—spookywillowwtalk 23:38, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
Makes me want to re-read Tarkin Wok142 (talk) 17:27, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 17:45, 13 June 2025 (UTC)
CometSmudge (talk) 16:39, 14 June 2025 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 19:18, 14 June 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Wok
Kuat should probably get context in the body- Sorted.
I think it would be good to have Coruscant contextualized as the "capital planet" instead of just the "capital" in both the body and in the intro- Tweaked it in the body. I don't like the term "capital planet" so I've worked it a tad differently.
One other minor thing but I think it would be ideal to have the image of Tarkin be from around the year of the events being described. There's a few different options that would work good and could be swapped in.Wok142 (talk) 22:15, 23 May 2025 (UTC)- Not a particular fan of these images I must admit. I prefer to take a more IU approach to supporting images as opposed to posed cover art. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:42, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
- Perhaps this? Tis the cropped version of this, pretty sure it isn't cover art. Wok142 (talk) 18:42, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
- Yeah I like that one better now that you don't have Vader standing in the backdrop like an NPC. Added. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:17, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
- Perhaps this? Tis the cropped version of this, pretty sure it isn't cover art. Wok142 (talk) 18:42, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
- Not a particular fan of these images I must admit. I prefer to take a more IU approach to supporting images as opposed to posed cover art. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:42, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
A date can be added to the introThere's a smattering of quotes mentioning Belderone that could work for the Description section if you want to peruse those or potentially shift some quotes around.Wok142 (talk) 18:25, 2 June 2025 (UTC)- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:35, 9 June 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:18, 14 June 2025 (UTC)