Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Kirrek (Great Hyperspace War)

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Battle of Kirrek (Great Hyperspace War)

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:37, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Floyd does more TOTJ stuff.

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Support

1. Good ol' WP:TOTJ. Gotta love it.—Tommy9281 ^{(No truth in me)} 00:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Blacklist:
   • I noticed immediately that the Aftermath section could use some expansion. One of the major things that happened after this particular battle was that Odan-Urr found the Dark Holocron, but this is nowhere mentioned in the article.
     • I was smokin crack.—Tommy9281 ^{(No truth in me)} 00:30, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
   • Can the BtS be expanded upon as well?
     • Addressed.
   • Does the text specifically refer to Odan and Ooroo as Jedi Generals?
     • Nope. Addressed.
   • "There they discovered the long-isolated Sith Empire, under the leadership of expansionist Dark Lord of the Sith Naga Sadow, who was in the midst of a power struggle with politically conservative Sith Lord Ludo Kressh." Sadow wasn't Dark Lord when the Daragons first arrived.
     • Addressed.
   • Infobox is missing the concurrent battles.
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 00:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
   • That's all.—Tommy9281 ^{(No truth in me)} 05:50, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
2. Pasta
   • There is an unsourced quote at the top of the prelude section.
     • Sourced.
   • I added some sources, but there might be others out there. Please check on Wizards and starwars.com to see if anything is mentioned there, though. Not sure why these were omitted from the list. Also check the Atlas to make sure there is nothing mentioned there. I believe there are supplements to TOTJ, but I do not have access to those. Additionally, a Bts mention would be nice for these sources. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 16:20, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
     • We went over it in IRC and I believe it to be addressed.
       • What I did say in IRC was that there should be a Bts mention that glances at these sources. I stand by this. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 20:29, February 8, 2010 (UTC)
3. A question to start: This article lists the Battle of Koros Major as a previous and Battle of Coruscant as a concurrent, however the Battle of Coruscant article lists this battle and the Battle of Koros Major as concurrent. Which is correct? Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:04, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• I am striking my vote on this article because there is info from the recently released Crosscurrent novel regarding this battle which is missing from the article. If you have the novel, please update the article, at which time I will review for accuracy. However, if you do not, it may be prudent for you to retract your nomination until the article can be updated properly and completely.—Tommy 9281 ^{(Mechno-chair)} 02:44, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

1. Nominator has requested that this nomination be removed until he can effect the necessary Crosscurrent updates.—Tommy 9281 ^{(Mechno-chair)} 04:27, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
2. Per nominator's request, then. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:52, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 04:58, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:13, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:43, February 9, 2010 (UTC)