- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Battle of Cato Neimoidia (Separatist attack)
- Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 21:50, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: WP:TCW. As long as you take the EU into account, it doesn't interfere with the timeline, for once.
(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)
Support
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:32, May 16, 2013 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 21:55, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
- If Anakin keeps destroying all the droids, how can they learn? Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 23:50, May 22, 2013 (UTC) - Cade
Calrayn 02:15, August 18, 2013 (UTC) - Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 13:18, August 19, 2013 (UTC)
- The zenith of the series.--ID-21 Dolphin (Talk) 22:05, September 1, 2013 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:07, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501
In the Aftermath section, I think you should mention that Gunray is not captured.- Added.
Could you completely source the BtS? I think that the battle has no apparent result could be sourced to ref 1.- Well, there's already a ref 1 halfway through the last sentence, which is still sourced to the episode. The reason I sourced it midway and not at the end of the sentence is because (in my opinion, of course) the fact that the battle didn't have a result was because of a general lack of information, not only from the episode but also from other source material. I can adjust it if you wish, but that was my take.
- That's okay, you can leave it as it is.
- Well, there's already a ref 1 halfway through the last sentence, which is still sourced to the episode. The reason I sourced it midway and not at the end of the sentence is because (in my opinion, of course) the fact that the battle didn't have a result was because of a general lack of information, not only from the episode but also from other source material. I can adjust it if you wish, but that was my take.
Could you alphabetize the categories? Good work otherwise.501st dogma(talk) 20:58, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
Al-Dulfin
Perhaps an image of the battle in 19 BBY would be more relevant in the Aftermath section. The image with Russo-ISC is not very relevant to the battle's impact.--ID-21 Dolphin(Talk) 02:28, June 24, 2013 (UTC)- I realize that it's not directly relevant to the battle itself, but another reason that I chose it is because that image shows Skywalker and Tano (the main participants in the battle) in full, whereas the rest of the battle images do not and cannot. I'm willing to change it if you feel very strongly about it, but right now I don't see a problem with it. CC7567 (talk) 05:52, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
I see. Well I still think an image of the 19 BBY battle is more appropriate since the article is about a battle in the war, not the life of Skywalker and Tano, but I respect your judgment either way. Hope that works.--ID-21 Dolphin(Talk) 21:29, August 6, 2013 (UTC)
- I realize that it's not directly relevant to the battle itself, but another reason that I chose it is because that image shows Skywalker and Tano (the main participants in the battle) in full, whereas the rest of the battle images do not and cannot. I'm willing to change it if you feel very strongly about it, but right now I don't see a problem with it. CC7567 (talk) 05:52, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
You switch between the terms "sabotage droid" and "buzz droid" without explicitly linking the two as the same.- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 14:09, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:07, September 7, 2013 (UTC)