Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Brentaal IV (Galactic Civil War)

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Battle of Brentaal IV (Galactic Civil War)

• Nomination by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:18, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Complimenting Horton Salm above, and Dar Keyis over on the GAN page.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 14:05, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 10:26, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
3. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:33, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
4. Don't get too comma or dash happy with your writing. —Xwing328^(Talk) 05:08, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
5. Graestan^(Talk) 22:30, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Why did Fel want to find his wife? Some context on this would be helpful. Otherwise, nice work, though beware of British spellings. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 14:20, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
   • Added some context. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:23, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
2. From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
   • Capitalization of TIE Fighters in infobox and fighters in body should be consistent. TIE Interceptor should be capitalized the same as whichever you settle on.
     • Addressed.
   • Infobox lists only one Mon Cal Cruiser in the battle but this image shows two. Since the Independence and Home One both appear in the arc, I'd guess it's those two. I don't recall it ever stating that Ackbar was aboard Independence, but he is shown aboard Home One. When I did Independence, I placed Ackbar aboard Home One, so if you can find something to the contrary, let me know and I'll change it.
     • Addressed, as per talk page conversation.
   • Since Imperial Starfighter Corps got deleted as fanon, you probably shouldn't refer to it (the Fel and 181st bits). Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:19, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
     • Changed to "Imperial armed forces". - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:13, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
3. Graestan the Merciless:
   • "Informing him that he had played his part in an elaborate trap orchestrated by her, and making him believe that the evacuation order would spring it, Isoto complied with her order." – Agreement issues.
     • Rewritten.
   • Context for Project Ambition is required.
     • Added.
   • The image thumbs are a bit small in this article, too. The busier images need to be larger for clarity.
     • How's that?
   • Context for Winter.
     • Added. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:41, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Graestan^(Talk) 18:58, 5 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:30, 6 April 2009 (UTC)