Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Battle of Abregado/Legends

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Battle of Abregado

• Nominated by: CC7567 ^(talk) 01:26, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: TCW; not much more to say. Turned out longer than I expected.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)

Support

1. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 12:23, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
2. My only complaint is this: 1,600 words is "a bit long?"^{(emphasis added)} Oy vey. ;) — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 03:26, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
3. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 13:15, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
4. Skypopper^{(HoloNet Transmission)} 17:36, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
5. —Xwing328^(Talk) 18:05, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
6. —Tommy9281 ^{(No quarter given, all exits sealed)} 18:36, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Pasta Bowl with Chaka noodles in an Abregado-rae–style red sauce:
   • "The two headed for the Abregado system, however, as Skywalker intended to search for survivors, against the Jedi Council's orders." The orders or instructions from the Jedi Council needs context.
     • Addressed.
   • "Sinker and Boost accompanied the Jedi, leaving Wolffe inside the pod to keep the communication signal alive, as it was the only chance for their rescue." These two Jedi are not Kel Dor so they are susceptible to the vacuum of space. Please clarify how they survived (i.e. equipment).
     • Addressed.
   • More later. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 23:34, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the first look. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:56, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
       • Last issue resolved via IRC. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 03:26, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
2. From Xwing328:
   • "Only Koon and the three clones in his pod were killed." Pretty sure they lived. —Xwing328^(Talk) 04:11, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
     • I really don't know how that got in there. :| Thanks for the review. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:42, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
   • I believe my earlier cleanup caused some confusion. I changed crafts to craft, as there is no 's' on the plural form.[1] After that, it looks like you changed the article to reflect there only being one ship, which I don't believe is correct. —Xwing328^(Talk) 17:17, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
     • Oops, really? I'll get it; thanks. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:23, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• At c. 1,600 words, not as long as the others, but still a bit long. CC7567 ^(talk) 01:26, 15 May 2009 (UTC)
• Dinner is served. This one has been officially Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:36, 20 June 2009 (UTC)