- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Barion Raner
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:44, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The only confirmed Blue Squadron survivor of Scarif so far
- Date Archived: 15:08, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1481 words (221 introduction, 1066 body, 194 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1460 words (221 introduction, 1070 body, 169 behind the scenes)
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—spookywillowwtalk 01:22, 4 April 2024 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:26, 16 April 2024 (UTC) - Lewisr (talk) 22:46, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 07:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)- Objection handled via Discord. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 23:50, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 15:06, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
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ThrawnChiss
I think you should mention that Blue Squadron actually didn't participate in the Battle of Yavin, instead of the ambiguity currently present. (it was Red, Gold and Green squadrons). ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 18:56, 17 February 2024 (UTC)- Clarified. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
- I know you pipelined "born" to "homeworld", but you should really pipeline that to reproduction instead because being born is not the same thing as it being your homeworld (Luke and Leia, among many others), and so you clarify that he was both born and from Ord Mantell in the body. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 22:54, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
- Changedthe pipelink and added the homeworld link elsewhere. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:24, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think you should specify in the prose that it was his homeworld something like "born on his homeworld, the planet Ord Mantell", instead of resorting to hiding that information in a pipeline. Additionally, with the way it is now, in the infobox you ref his homeworld to the Topps card and in the body you are technically referencing to geektionary, but both should have the same reference. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 18:07, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think you should specify in the prose that it was his homeworld something like "born on his homeworld, the planet Ord Mantell", instead of resorting to hiding that information in a pipeline. Additionally, with the way it is now, in the infobox you ref his homeworld to the Topps card and in the body you are technically referencing to geektionary, but both should have the same reference. ThrawnChiss7
- Changedthe pipelink and added the homeworld link elsewhere. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:24, 1 May 2024 (UTC)
Uber
If he was born on Ord Mantell, the birth field should be filled out.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:12, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
- Huh, always thought birth was just for the date. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
- It includes location too, always has. We've seen characters with a different homeworld and birthplace. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:15, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
- It includes location too, always has. We've seen characters with a different homeworld and birthplace. UberSoldat93
- Huh, always thought birth was just for the date. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:22, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
Since policy dictates we go by US release dates, the film and junior novel are a simultaneous first appearance.UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:00, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 05:44, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:06, 6 May 2024 (UTC)