Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bakkar

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Bakkar

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:49, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: FAN #2, canon this time. Thanks to Fred for help with the GE parts!
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE, WP:NOVELS

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. OOM 224 17:30, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
2. MasterFred(talk) 07:24, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:44, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
4. Samonic (Talk) 18:45, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
5. smol copy-edit Fan26 (Talk) 18:57, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
6. Ngl, when I first saw the guy's pic, I thought he was an OOU person. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:04, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
7. A very fun read for prior to lunch!—spookywilloww^talk 19:05, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• One thing that stands out to me here (other than that redlink :P) is that the intro doesn't mention Bakkar's P&T, so I think that should be mentioned
  • What are you interested in being mentioned? Already got his fanhood of podracing in there. And redlink done.
    • Ah, sorry. I missed that and only saw the part about the talkative droid OOM 224 18:28, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
• Grammatical errors in the last sentence, BTS OOM 224 22:09, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Not sure of what you speak. Please elaborate. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:09, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
    • "like used in The Official Black Spire Outpost Cookbook,[2] this article presents the former's as the canonical depiction." — "Like used" and "former's" don't work in this line here. OOM 224 18:28, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
      • How's that? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:54, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
        • That's better
• Please see if you're okay with this edit of mine OOM 224 22:38, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I am, thanks. Just a reminder though, I prefer to leave this type of sentence without a ref.
    • Sure OOM 224 17:30, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
• Also, "dreaming of selling his family's famous meat on another Outer Rim Territories planet" sounds like good P&T material OOM 224 22:43, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:18, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Is there an "on" missing in the quote used for "Skills and abilities"? MasterFred(talk) 04:40, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
  • I'm assuming you mean "to". Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:55, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

One has to have a proper meal before reviewing a nom by JMM

• You're linking to a Legends article, droid builder. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:20, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:58, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Would be nice to get a picture of his from the Cookbook and add it to the BtS. Stake black ^msg 13:50, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Yeah, will add when I get back home on Sunday. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:22, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
    • There we go. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:36, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:07, 7 March 2022 (UTC)