Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Arden Lyn

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Arden Lyn

  • Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 04:12, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Fresh out of the GAN oven.

(4 Inqs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Voted for it when it was a GAN. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 04:22, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:44, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:28, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote GAN reviewed. --Eyrezer 06:04, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
  5. -- 1358 (Talk) 19:01, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Solid work as usual. --Imperialles 15:58, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:34, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Green Tentacle:
  • File:Ardenlyn2.jpg isn't properly sourced.
  • Intro: "Lyn was reawakened in the Unknown Regions by three of Emperor Palpatine's Inquisitors…" This seems to conflict with the body where she's reawakened by scouts and the Inquisitors turn up later.
    • Fixed.
  • Reawakening: "…while also working as Grand Admiral Demetrius Zaarin's agent on Imperial Center." You've placed this before she turns against Palpatine. Any reason for thinking she was already working with Zaarin, otherwise it seems more likely to come later as the source only mentions it after the Battle of Hoth.
    • Since it says "Zaarin's agent on Coruscant," and before Hoth she had already gone rogue, I took it that they had been in cahoots for a while. Thefourdotelipsis 00:27, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
      • Makes sense, but why would they be cahooting before she turns on Palpatine after Yavin? I'd have thought after Yavin would be the most logical place for it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:02, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
  • The Zaarin insurrection: "Palpatine later took revenge on Lyn, killing her conclusively." Any reason no date is given? The Essential Guide to the Force is quite clear that she was killed by the resurrected Palpatine in 10 ABY. Same goes for the infobox date of death.
    • I... remember reading that. Going to chalk it up to a gigantic brain fart. Fixed.
  • Behind the scenes: "Peña touched on the content of the video game itself…" Presumably the game in question is Masters of Teräs Käsi. You need to say so since TIE Fighter was the last one mentioned. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:35, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:34, June 4, 2010 (UTC)