Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Antidar Williams/Legends

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Antidar Williams

  • Nomination by: Thefourdotelipsis 09:21, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Part of FourDotProject: WTS.

(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:46, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Spock! Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:32, 6 September 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:16, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:12, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Greyman(Talk) 09:01, 29 September 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:57, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. His survival is mentioned twice, at the end of "Lieutenant..." and beginning of the Naboo section. I altered your opening sentence a little and I think it looks better now, but let me know if you don't like it. Good work, interesting character. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:09, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
    • Tweaked. Thanks for the non-list review. :P Thefourdotelipsis 00:55, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
      • Sorry for the delay in striking, I'd forgotten about this. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:12, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • Can we not link something here?: "Williams served faithfully in the various battles of Troiken"
    • Likewise: "Several battles ensued as Stark's men attempted to take Mount Avos"
    • The BTS should indicate that he first appeared in the novelization, if you're going to write it that way, for factual accuracy. You could say he was created for George Lucas's The Phantom Menace, however, since I know this bothers you.
    • Please do separate the film and novel when specifying the character's first appearance in the Apps list. They are not both his first appearance, only the novel is. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:12, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:57, 30 September 2008 (UTC)