Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Amanoa

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Amanoa

(6 Inqs/5 Users/10 total)

Support

1. Nominated. Greyman^(Paratus) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
2. Jedimca0^{(Do or Do Not, There is No Try)} 18:44, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
3. Ozzel 19:27, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
4. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers)} 20:03, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
5. You want darkness, Greyman? I'll show you darkness! - Graestan ^{(This party's over)} 00:33, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
6. Chack Jadson ^Talk 00:49, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
7. Thefourdotelipsis 04:21, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
8. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 16:51, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
9. No, I'll give you darkness. ♫ I belieeeve inathingcalledlove... Just listentotherhythmofmahHEAaAaAaAaAart... ♫ Gonk ^(Gonk!) 15:17, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
10. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:04, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
11. Imperialles 20:18, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

1. Longer intro. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers)} 18:31, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
   • Expanded by a couple words now…same length as some current FA's, see example here. Greyman^(Paratus) 18:52, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
2. Would be nice if the BTS said who created the character. -- Ozzel 19:27, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
   • Added and fixed :) Greyman^(Paratus) 19:38, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
   • From the desk of Atarumaster88
     • POVishness with repeated use of "beautiful", "evil", etc., especially with that infobox picture (ugh). A bit of wording change is all that's needed.
       • Fixed. Greyman^(Paratus)
     • Fix capitalization of "Queen" throughout article. Unless it is followed by a name, it should be de-capitalized.
       • Fixed. Greyman^(Paratus)
     • Needs context on why Jeth worked with the Beast Riders.
       • Context added as to why Jeth did this. Greyman^(Paratus)
     • Remove links from quotes, per MoS.
       • Fixed. Greyman^(Paratus)
     • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 19:43, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
3. From the, er, keyboard of Green Tentacle:
   • "One day, Ommin suddenly lost interest in mundane daily activities, as his training under Nadd had progressed considerably." - presumably that's the ghost of Nadd.
     • Fixed, added context. Greyman^(Paratus) 18:31, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
   • Inconsistent capitalizing of King and Queen. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 18:08, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
     • Fixed, I think. Greyman^(Paratus) 18:31, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

• File:Amanoa and Galia.jpg is tagged with a {{Crop}} tag. The sentence "Amanoa is a genus of tropical trees and shrubs found in South America and Africa." in the BTS section seems to have little relevance to the article itself, other than as pure trivia. Remove it if possible. --Imperialles 20:08, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 20:07, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

• A co-project of Graestan’s and mine which we feel is now ready for FA. Greyman^(Paratus) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)