Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Akanseh

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Akanseh

• Nominated by: - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:41, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More DarkStryder goodness

(5 Inqs/0 User/5 Total)

Support

1. Greyman^(Talk) 17:04, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One makes me want to explore DarkStryder. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:46, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
3. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 18:30, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
4. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 18:04, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:50, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the desk of Atarumaster88
   • "transported between planets," You use a very similar phrase two lines up. Reword or something. (intro)
     • Reworded.
   • More of a question than anything, but Akanseh's ultimate actions with that one syringe are unknown? They're not listed.
     • It's never explictly stated what he did with the syringe, just that he faced the choice to administer it to the prisoner, or face the same fate.
   • I would de-capitalize Headman, but if that's how the source writes it, then it should be left that way.
     • Rechecked the source, and decapitalized.
   • Otherwise clean. I like your work, Cavalier One. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 20:17, 30 June 2008 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:19, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • Can we link some battle article to Mon Calamari's subjugation?
     • Linked to First Battle of Mon Calamari (Imperial Era), which I believe should be the right one.
   • I suspect we also have an article for this "mission": "Akanseh learned of a New Republic mission assigned to track Moff Sarne down"
     • At the moment, we don't as far as I know. I'm working on one off-line since its a big article that covers all four books of the DarkStryder Campaign.
   • I've created a red link for something that really should be an article. Please create one to kill the intro red link. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:28, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Killed. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 07:44, 11 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:50, 11 July 2008 (UTC)