Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ahto City

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Ahto City

Support

1. --Shaelas^{(HoloConference)} 06:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
2. KEJ 08:04, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
3. Nice work, Shaelas. I know how much work that must have been. -Sarendipity ^Talk File:Atrissig.jpg 04:05, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
4. .... 04:15, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

• Some of the intro is in present tense. --Eyrezer 07:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Corrected.--Shaelas^{(HoloConference)} 15:48, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
• Too many images. --Imp 18:48, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
  • No there's not, I checked.--Shaelas^{(Ahto High Court)} 22:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
    • Still too many images. --Imperialles 22:06, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
      • Not so much too many images, IMO, but the placement that is the problem. I'd move the walls of Ahto up to the history section, and remove Yortal Ixlis's image. It's a little wonky on a standard resolution. ^Jorrel _Fraajic 23:22, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
• Copyedit this. Imperial and Force-sensitive both get capitalized, among others. Atarumaster88 21:24, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Done.--Shaelas^{(Ahto High Court)} 16:55, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
    • I further copy edited the history section. ^Jorrel _Fraajic 23:22, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
• One thing before I'll vote support: History needs sectioning. It needs to be broken up, if only with two subsections. ^Jorrel _Fraajic 23:22, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Done.--Shaelas^{(Ahto High Court)} 21:49, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

• Let's see if this goes as well as the others.--Shaelas^{(HoloConference)} 06:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
• The Notable residents or visitors section is cool! --Eyrezer 07:29, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
  • It is, but it would be even cooler if it listed all notable (named) residents and visitors like Tansarii Point Station does. KEJ 08:04, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
• That swoop image should be replaced with one of the Ahto City swoop track (it's Citadel Station now). It's not rules-based, though, so I'm not objecting on it. - Lord Hydronium 19:27, 12 April 2007 (UTC)
  • I can't find one. I can't make one either. I am not sure what function the computer has to allow you to upload images from a game, but I don't even have the game for the PC. So someone else would have to get an image. I'm sorry.--Shaelas^{(Ahto High Court)} 20:27, 12 April 2007 (UTC)