Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 22

EduCorps Meeting 22, aka Spring Break, will occur on Sunday, April 26th, 2015 at 7 PM ET in the #Wookieepedia-educorps channel on IRC. If you are an EduCorps-only member and cannot attend, please leave notes saying how you will vote on the articles under review.

Spring break

Fun in the sun

• Cuvacian
• Ho'Din herbal tea
• Gondar
• Mon Calamari Commercial Expeditionary Service
• MUQ-751
  • Remaining objections addressed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:39, April 26, 2015 (UTC)
• Oath of Obedience
  • Date adjusted. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:39, April 26, 2015 (UTC)
• The Agony of Tarkin

Rainstorm

• Aaghra
  • "not far from Coruscant, the most politically important planet in galactic history." This cannot be sourced to the Wizards article.
  • "which thus lacked suitable terrain for life." The source does not explicitly state that it lacked suitable terrain for life. Since there are planets like Mustafar with creatures like the lava flea, I don't think that this can be assumed.
  • Both done. Cade Calrayn 22:48, April 26, 2015 (UTC)
• Andrevea River
  • I think that this article should have a description section that includes the information in the article about the layout of the river. This section should also describe the terrain on either side of the river. Just from the image I can tell that there is a fair amount that could be mentioned in a description section.
    • Descrip-tified. It's now over 250. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:47, April 23, 2015 (UTC)
• Anonymous rescue worker
  • This article needs to be referenced.
  • Per policy, this article should be moved to something like "Unidentified rescue worker"
• Borna (This one was discussed at a previous meeting, but no template was added to the article.)
  • From the sources, there is nothing I can see that states he was alive during the Rebellion era.
  • The part about it being dark and moody should probably be mentioned as Jerec's opinion.
• Bubble Bowl
  • There is nothing on page twelve mentioning the Rebellion era. This needs another reference.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The source refers to "Vegeparsine" as "VegeParsine"
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The correct term is "Liann" not "Liannan"
    • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Cy Yunga's Podracer
  • Does the source explicitly state that comets are pictured on his engines. They could easily be meteors if nothing is stated.
  • From reviews of other articles, I do not believe the 32 BBY date can be sourced to the game.
  • There is quite a bit of infobox-exclusive information.
• CZ-332
  • Page 24 does not give this information: "during the Galactic Civil War between the Galactic Empire and the Alliance to Restore the Republic."
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The Rebellion era is exclusive to the infobox.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Dulin
  • I'm not seeing anything in the article stating that it was located on a planet. It could be some other kind of stellar body.
  • The article mentions Dulin starport and it mentions a city, but it never calls the city Dulin. Dulin starport might not have the same name as the city it is located in.
  • The body should mention that a southern approach vector was used during the fireworks,
  • The article should state the hours that the fireworks display occurred.
• Eye of Zallow
  • I believe the in-universe dates sourced to the game need additional referencing.
  • The April 2014 release date for the update needs another reference.
  • Both done. Cade Calrayn 22:48, April 26, 2015 (UTC)
• Fish stick
  • There is nothing on page twelve mentioning the Rebellion era. This needs another reference.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The source refers to "Vegeparsine" as "VegeParsine"
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Page twelve does not mention that Lianna was populated with Humans. This needs another reference.
    • It's elsewhere in the book so the reference now works. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • A lot of the capitalization of the food in this article differs from the original source.
    • I can't find any differences in the article apart from the VegeParsine? Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
      • Choya was mistakenly capitalized in part of the article before this edit.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:43, April 21, 2015 (UTC)
• How to Do the Allied Tion on 25 Credits a Day
  • There is nothing on page twelve stating that it was available during the Rebellion era. This needs another reference.
    • Removed the page number. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The article should go into more slightly more detail about how it describes Liann food's style and ingredients.
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • A quick run-down of the recommended food should be added.
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The information about being about to eat for five credits on the street should be mentioned.
    • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Huloon
  • The full release date cannot be sourced to the book.
  • The part in the infobox about population should mention both before and after the Hutts depopulated the planet.
  • Also, if the population was reduced to none, the Hutts would not be an immigrated species. Someone needs to check and see which is correct.
  • There is some detail in the Huloon (species) article that needs to be mentioned here. The original source should be checked for accuracy.
• Lill
  • There is nothing on page twelve mentioning the Rebellion era. This needs another reference.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The source refers to "Veghash" as "VegHash"
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Page twelve does not mention that Lianna was populated with Humans. This needs another reference.
    • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The introduction is way too short.
    • Expanded. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The intro should state who viewed lill as overpowering and unsubtle.
    • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
• Pash Cracken's protocol droid — The date destroyed and class fields in the infobox need additional referencing to be valid.
• Unidentified smuggler (Level 2142)
  • The story mentions a Centax 3 delivery.
    • The story doesn't link that to the smuggler. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • He left two days before they got there.
    • Specified. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • It says that the smuggler had a transport.
    • I had counted that as a more generic use of the term, but fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
• 1.6 Fixing redirecting link(s)Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid
  • The manufacturer and height fields in the infobox need additional referencing to be valid.
  • The full release date needs a source.

Discussion

Attendance

Animated creatures

1. Finally, Finally, Finally have a day off. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:17, April 14, 2015 (UTC)
2. Should be able to make it. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:47, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
3. I can hopefully make it. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:31, April 25, 2015 (UTC)
   • Left notes just in case I don't make it back in time. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:31, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Just a human

1. Not looking likely, notes have been left below.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:31, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Talking vegetables

Exiled Jedi

• Kill: Cuvacian, Ho'Din herbal tea, Mon Calamari Commercial Expeditionary Service, The Agony of Tarkin
• Keep: Oath of Obedience
• Extend:
  • Gondar (Right now the movie release date is sourced to The Essential Reader's Companion, which I strongly doubt is valid.)
  • MUQ-751 (I just noticed that this article was worked on. The part about the E-5 blaster rifle needs additional explanation as the Visual Dictionary does not mention MUQ-751. If someone will fix it tonight, consider this a vote for keep.)
• Probe:
  • Aaghra
  • Andrevea River (This part needs to be reworded as it makes it sound like the delta is just stuck on the side of the river: "Along the river, there was a mainland river delta.")
  • Anonymous rescue worker
  • Borna
  • Cy Yunga's Podracer
  • CZ-332 (The category identifies the droid as third-degree. If the source establishes this, it should be mentioned in the main article, otherwise the category should be changed.)
  • Dulin
  • Eye of Zallow
  • Huloon
  • Lill (Some of the information in the history section should be briefly noted in the description section.)
  • Pash Cracken's protocol droid
  • Unidentified smuggler (Level 2142) (If there is not enough to explicitly connect the Centax 3 delivery to the smuggler, it should still be noted somehow in the BTS. I thought the story strongly implied that the Centax 3 delivery referred to the smuggler.)
  • [[Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid]]
• Spare: Bubble Bowl, How to Do the Allied Tion on 25 Credits a Day (204 words, needs sectioning)

SE

• Kill: Cuvacian, Ho'Din herbal tea, Mon Calamari Commercial Expeditionary Service, MUQ-751, Oath of Obedience, The Agony of Tarkin
• Extend: Gondar
• Probe:Aaghra, Andrevea River, Anonymous rescue worker, Borna, Cy Yunga's Podracer, CZ-332, Dulin, Eye of Zallow, Huloon, Lill, Pash Cracken's protocol droid, Unidentified smuggler (Level 2142) (I also believed the story strongly implied the Centax 3 delivery was connected to him), [[Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid]]
• Spare: Bubble Bowl, How to do the Allied Tion on 25 Credits a Day. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:31, April 26, 2015 (UTC)

Minutes

Log

Attendance

• 501st dogma
• Cade Calrayn
• Exiledjedi
• Corellian Premier

CA status kept

• MUQ-751
• Oath of Obedience
• Gondar (Probation extended)

CA status removed

• Cuvacian
• Ho'Din herbal tea
• Mon Calamari Commercial Expeditionary Service
• The Agony of Tarkin

Articles placed on probation

• Anonymous rescue worker
• Borna
• Cy Yunga's Podracer
• CZ-332
• Dulin
• Huloon
• Lill
• Pash Cracken's protocol droid
• Unidentified smuggler (Level 2142)
• [[Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid]]

Articles spared probation

• Aaghra
• Andrevea River
• Bubble Bowl
• Eye of Zallow
• Fish stick
• How to Do the Allied Tion on 25 Credits a Day

Responsibilities

• Corellian Premier is on paperwork
• 501st dogma will be scheduling