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Vrook Lamar's Padawan
Things to do
- 119 words in body, needs sectioning removed.
- Removed sectioning, should be good now. Fan26 (Talk) 05:17, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
- There's no need to source the majority of the article to a manual ref note that only mentions one source. Just source everything to that medium, plain and simple.
- I'd consider this article an example of when trying to stick a CA's layout to the Bio + P&T scheme leads to detrimental effects to the article. The first sentence of the second paragraph says that the argument was heated, which is the same as the first paragraph saying it was intense. And the single-word "Force-sensitive" can be worked into the very first sentence of the article.
- I'd like to see BBY dating worked into the article.
- I also consider the protocol droid's recording of the discussion between Lamar and Tokare and its subsequent viewing by Surik as relevant to this subject and would like to see that worked into the article's body. Imperators II(Talk) 21:36, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
Removal of CA status
- Placed on probation at Meeting 76. Fan26 (Talk) 22:46, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- Probation extended at Meeting 77. Imperators II(Talk) 14:31, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 78. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 21:05, 8 May 2021 (UTC)