Wookieepedia:EC/Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid (second review)

Unidentified Tatooine astromech droid

Things to do

• Missing refs in the infobox
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:09, September 21, 2018 (UTC)
• Infobox exclusive info. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:03, September 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • Also added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:09, September 21, 2018 (UTC)
• I suspect the referencing in this article needs to be modernized, i.e., for example, does Jedi Academy really identify the droid as an R5-series? If not, that needs to be sourced to a manually-written reference note explaining where this information is derived from. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:32, September 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • Indeed it does. I'm confident that everything matches. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:58, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
    • So, does Jedi Academy really identify the droid as an R5-series? Imperators II^(Talk) 05:49, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
      • Yep, specifically. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 13:34, October 6, 2018 (UTC)
• Ref 4 is unnecessary. Imperators II^(Talk) 05:49, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Removed. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 13:34, October 6, 2018 (UTC)
• Instead of ref 5, the first mention of Korr's species should just be referenced to Crosscurrent. Imperators II^(Talk) 05:49, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Species and gender are customizable, so I moved the ref note up. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 13:34, October 6, 2018 (UTC)
• BTS sorely needs some better writing. "The game requires four out of five optional missions to proceed with the main story line, including the mission to recover the droid. This article assumes full completion" — requires to complete four missions; full completion of what. Imperators II^(Talk) 05:49, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Also the current wording suggests that the mission to recover the droid is required to proceed with the main story line, which I suspect is the exact opposite of what was intended here. Imperators II^(Talk) 05:51, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • BTS re-worked. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 13:34, October 6, 2018 (UTC)
• Update sourcing for the R5 designation. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:10, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • The game's briefing screen for this mission states: A moisture farmer on Tatooine recently overheard a group of smugglers talking about a Sith cult in a local bar and had his R5 droid record this conversation Isn't that sufficient enough to source it to the game? QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:18, October 11, 2018 (UTC)
    • Look at refs 1 and 3 in this article to see what I meant by my original objection. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:37, October 11, 2018 (UTC)
      • Done. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:03, October 12, 2018 (UTC)
• Simplify Refs 3 and 4. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:10, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:45, October 11, 2018 (UTC)
• Add intro and sections. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 03:10, October 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:45, October 11, 2018 (UTC)
• The article is way over 250 words now. This is GA territory. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:45, October 11, 2018 (UTC)
• Article needs to be merged with R5-D2, according to the identification provided within the game's files. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 20:07, November 25, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of CA status

• Article placed on probation at meeting 49. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:47, September 6, 2018 (UTC)
• Probation extended at Meeting 50. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:42, October 7, 2018 (UTC)
• Status removed at Meeting 51. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 20:07, November 25, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Note that I added the game mechanics tag after reviewing the mission - it is one of the non-required ones. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:58, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

• By the way, the game files of Jedi Academy refer to this droid as R5-D2. We usually accept information that comes from game files as being valid, so this article will probably have to be merged. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 11:54, November 10, 2018 (UTC)