Wookieepedia:EC/Rengali Imperial Naval Academy

Rengali Imperial Naval Academy

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• Refs need formatting, linking & expanding. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Which ones, for EGW or Friends? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'm talking about ref 1 and ref 4. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:45, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
      • OK, re-worked. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 14:09, August 12, 2018 (UTC)
• The BTS addresses the subject by a random abbreviated form, and contains info that's redundant to Sources section. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Name expanded; but what is redundant? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • The second and third sentence of the BTS are both redundant to the information present in Sources. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:45, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
      • OK, expanded the sentences. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 14:09, August 12, 2018 (UTC)
        • That wasn't necessary, since, like I said, those sentences were just a regurgitation of information present in the Sources section. I've removed them for you. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:39, August 12, 2018 (UTC)
• More precise categorization needed. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Narrowed down. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
• Body needs to be split into paragraphs. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • So split. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
• "The Rebel Alliance pilot Zal Artha also attended the Naval Academy to become a pilot" — I'm guessing Artha hadn't become a Rebel pilot by that time yet. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Indeed. Placed that bit at the end. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
• Linking needed (e.g., Marriage/Legends, Rebel pilot/Legends). Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Voila. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
• Maybe some context for "Chandrilan"? Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • That it's a planet, or why it would matter? I just don't want to go too far on a tangent. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • The reader won't necessarily know what a "Chandrilan" is without context like that. You don't have to add much, I don't think it'll be distracting. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:45, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
      • Context added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 14:09, August 12, 2018 (UTC)
        • Now it reads kind of redundant; you should probably pipelink Chandrilan/Legends. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
          • OK, hid the link. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:36, August 18, 2018 (UTC)
• From what I gather from the Age of Rebellion Beginner Game (yes, it should also be italicized like that in the article) Wook article, that boxed set contains both the Character Folios and the Takeover at Whisper Base booklet — why is the one given precedence over the other in the BTS? Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Correct; but it was decided awhile ago that the Folios couldn't stand alone. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
    • What I mean is that BTS should mention that it was simultaneously first mentioned in the folio and in "Takeover at Whisper Base". Imperators II^(Talk) 16:45, July 16, 2018 (UTC)
      • Included. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 14:09, August 12, 2018 (UTC)
        • Ah, so the Academy is only mentioned in the Character Folio? In that case, I'm leaning towards just listing the Beginner Game as a Source as opposed to the specific adventure. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
        • Looks like it is more consistent with how we handle the Folios, so I removed the adventure. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:36, August 18, 2018 (UTC)
• "the 2016 adventure" needs a bit of context. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fully named. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:29, July 15, 2018 (UTC)
• Okay, Zal's Character Folio doesn't say Imperial High Command, it says Imperial Naval Command. We have a slightly-differently named article for that; add to it and link appropriately in the article. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:36, August 18, 2018 (UTC)
• Why are you linking "Naval Academy" to Imperial Navy like that? (There's an extra whitespace there, as well.) I'd try to incorporate the link to the Navy way up in the first sentence. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:58, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
  • OK, I moved the link. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:36, August 18, 2018 (UTC)
• Is there any date specifier that indicates the events of "Takeover at Whisper Base" take place in 0 ABY, not, say, 1 ABY? Imperators II^(Talk) 13:18, August 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • It's not outright stated, but within weeks of the Battle per the Folios. I adjusted the date citation per that. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:20, September 22, 2018 (UTC)
    • Now you need a source for the fact that a few weeks ABY is still 0 ABY, not 1 ABY. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:06, September 22, 2018 (UTC)
      • Added info here. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:48, October 4, 2018 (UTC)
        • Upon further review of NEC, I've come to the conclusion that no additional sourcing is, in fact, required, just a little rephrasing. Imperators II^(Talk) 05:58, October 4, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of CA status

• Article placed on probation at Meeting 48. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:26, June 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Probation extended at Meeting 49. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:12, September 6, 2018 (UTC)

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